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Finding My Pack by Lane Whitt

bookwormbetty's review against another edition

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4.0

great read

Really enjoyed this book and all it had to offer. The characters are awesome and very diverse as far as personality wise. The world building is great. Down fall is the editing is rough, as in did an editor even read this? Other than horrible editing which I looked over because I really liked the story, this was a great dead.

mrose21's review against another edition

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3.0

I cannot give this a 4 stars, its just a bit too out there for four stars.

I liked this book and I didn't like this book, I was a little worried at the start thinking 'oh no, she is underage this is creepy' and although she isn't 'of age' as they don't know how old she actually is, she isn't that bad either.

It is slightly creepy the way all of the guys fall for her, it did make me a bit wary but it isn't done in a perverted way that is bad, its just a little weird. I got pretty into it by 50% and was intrigued with why Kitten (btw the name repulses me) is being hunted the way she is. It isn't explained and the book kind of just ends, without much warning...

This being said, I do want to find out what happens to her so I may read on (yay for kindle unlimited!)

bookwife's review against another edition

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1.0

I need to stop wasting my time finishing books that I completely hate.

cutegoose09's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

dalidja's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional funny hopeful lighthearted mysterious reflective tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.0

illustriousbooknerds's review against another edition

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Okay I feel like this is an something everyone needs to know going into this.

For about half the book, the main character is portrayed to be SIXTEEN. While the guys may look like they are teenagers as well, they have all lived for a much longer time (an Edward/Bella type thing). Also, even though they don’t have sex with her when they believe she’s SIXTEEN, they do kiss her and dry hump her. Apparently 16 is the age of consent in their minds because they were born in like the 1700s. This made me feel so uncomfortable so I just changed her to 18 in my mind.

Around the 60% mark, you find out she is older then they first thought and is actually 18/19.

Just a Heads Up.

perfectlyimperfect's review against another edition

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3.0

Interesting!

This is a different take on shifters, which is refreshing. The plot is really interesting, and I'm fascinated by the way the story is shaping up.

There are grammatical errors and missing words. I'm pretty sure this is an Indie author, and possibly a their first book.

Just remember fiction is subjective and you should read it for yourself to form an opinion.

urock2's review against another edition

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2.0

Cliffhanger Ending

lollimolly's review against another edition

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2.0

Interesting plot, but the main character is so weirdly inconsistent. She's so extremely ignorant, but supposedly self taught all highschool subjects by age 12 and has eidetic memory. She is supposedly street smart and survived on her own her whole life, but takes a torn teddy bear to a doctor for surgery. Her friend used to take her to cafes for lunch, but now she suddenly had no idea how to use silverware. She doesn't know what a Ferris wheel is, but she knows what rivets are. She thinks chrome is glass. I'm just so very, very confused.

Oh and the way a southern, country accent is portrayed is so weird lol.

I'm actually gonna pick up the second one because I'm hoping the author improved. I'd guess this was the authors first book and am interested to see if the next one is executed better.

emilyrberry's review against another edition

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adventurous emotional funny hopeful lighthearted fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.75

I really wish her name wasn’t Kitten