imzadirose's review
1.0
The grammar for this book is AWFUL. And I mean SOOOOOOOOOOOOO bad. Wow.
The story drags and is boring compared with Book 1. It gives backstory and on its own, that'd be fine but the grammar is so awful, I don't know how even the most basic readers can look beyond it. The formatting's a mess too but not as bad as the grammar.
Let me put it this way - there's a 55 word FRAGMENT sentence.
Let's not get started on the animal errors. While a child might, there's no way a grown woman would mistake a dolphin fin for a shark. SMH. And the way they describe feeding a stingray, holding something "up" under the water? No, again.
I'm so disgusted by this book I don't know if I can finish the rest of the series.
The story drags and is boring compared with Book 1. It gives backstory and on its own, that'd be fine but the grammar is so awful, I don't know how even the most basic readers can look beyond it. The formatting's a mess too but not as bad as the grammar.
Let me put it this way - there's a 55 word FRAGMENT sentence.
Let's not get started on the animal errors. While a child might, there's no way a grown woman would mistake a dolphin fin for a shark. SMH. And the way they describe feeding a stingray, holding something "up" under the water? No, again.
I'm so disgusted by this book I don't know if I can finish the rest of the series.
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