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11 Scenes by Octavia Jensen

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adventurous fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? N/A
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

2.5

This is a weird one to rate because it's not exactly a book in the traditional sense, nor does it really have a true story associated with it. Basically it's a collection of short stories, each a BDSM scene. 

Communication is healthy and it depicts a loving, considered D/s relationship. A+ in that vein. We stan a healthy sexual relationship here. 

Dialogue is cringey at times. Not really logically written (but much better than the first). It doesn't really feel like a "professional" work -- maybe more like something you'd find on a fanfic site.

The lack of cohesiveness is what brings this rating down for me; this is quite literally the definition of "porn without a plot." Which is fine if that's what you're looking for, but it's not for me, especially when the book that comes before this one was so awful.

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