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ladybug12793's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
Reading this was like pulling teeth. Where the first book was fast-paced and fun, this one dragged on. Nothing happens except for a bunch of filler until the last 15% of the book with ridiculous plot twists.
I don’t even want to get into the “love triangle” with the wet blanket brothers. Absolutely no chemistry between any of them. Again, like the first book, I felt no emotional connection towards these characters.
Since this book was so underwhelming, I don’t think I will continue on in the series.
0 🌶️
* please disregard grammatical errors due to voice texting
Graphic: Drug abuse, Emotional abuse, Kidnapping, Murder, and Fire/Fire injury
Moderate: Violence
Minor: Cursing and Infidelity
Cursing- A**hole is said like 2-3 times. That’s it.traciereads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.75
Graphic: Kidnapping
Moderate: Death, Gun violence, Infidelity, Violence, Medical content, Grief, Stalking, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Addiction, Child death, Cursing, Drug abuse, Death of parent, and Pregnancy
troixreads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? N/A
4.75
Moderate: Death and Grief
Minor: Child death, Cursing, Kidnapping, and Alcohol
karlin0336's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Original Review: 4.5 Stars ~ I loved this book even more than the first one! It wasted no time in diving into another mystery, and this one was full of romance, backstory, action, and heart-wrenching moments. There were so many unexpected twists and turns--- I was left eagerly burning through pages. I don't generally finish books this fast and am not usually this motivated to finish. I LOVE this series. I LOVE the characters. I LOVE the story. Most of all, I'm glad I took "a very risky gamble" in trying something outside of my comfort genre. I can't wait to see how this series concludes in The Final Gambit.
The two love interests are both great. Jameson is quickly growing on me as a character and Grayson has been my favorite character in the series ever since his debut in book 1. I hope they both find love and happiness in their own way!
Hoping book three won't disappoint!
Moderate: Alcoholism, Drug abuse, Infidelity, Violence, and Fire/Fire injury
Minor: Cursing
torturedreadersdept's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Abandonment
Minor: Addiction, Body horror, Cursing, Death, Drug abuse, Gun violence, Infertility, Infidelity, Miscarriage, Suicidal thoughts, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Medical content, Dementia, Kidnapping, Grief, Stalking, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Fire/Fire injury, Gaslighting, Alcohol, Dysphoria, and Injury/Injury detail
araiapapaya's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
Moderate: Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, and Death of parent
Minor: Cursing, Violence, Kidnapping, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
witchwritingfanfics's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
Graphic: Death and Violence
Moderate: Addiction, Cursing, Gun violence, Medical content, Kidnapping, Stalking, Pregnancy, and Fire/Fire injury
Minor: Infertility, Infidelity, Miscarriage, and Medical trauma
There's also a few mentions of amnesia and talking with the dead throughout.khucc's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Blood, Grief, Death of parent, and Fire/Fire injury
Minor: Bullying and Cursing
rusty_spurs's review against another edition
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
2.5
The amount of times I rolled my eyes while reading this book...
Plot
I really enjoyed the plot of the first book so I was happy to see I enjoyed this one almost as much. The story moved along quickly but I began to get tired of the plot twists because that's all that held this book together for me.
Characters
I find that the side characters are more favorable in my eyes than the main ones. Avery, the main character, irks me for a few reasons.
1. She obsessed over the guys.
2. She's dramatic.
3. The whole book is her being selfish; going against security measures and doing the opposite of whatever is advised. She's not the strong, independent woman I think she was intended to embody - she's the annoying girl who's trying too hard to prove her independence.
The Hawthorne brothers are easy to tell apart but Grayson and Jameson sometimes flow into one. No wonder Avery had a tough time deciding between the two. The writer has created these seemingly perfect guys but it's not one bit realistic. I wish readers were given characters that seemed human. And I know that the author points that out - the Hawthorne brothers aren't human. Yet I can't help but
Relationships
Going on a rant about how much I hate the romance in this series would profit no one but me so I'll sum up my frustration with a few sentences. This books reads like it was meant for a lovesick thirteen-year-old. The guys in this are written to be attractive in everything they do. They breathe and Avery can't help but drool. The romance is so cheesy and unrealistic it kills me. I know it's YA fiction but COME ON!
Overall, I don't hate this book but it's not something I will reread or recommend to most people. I'm planning on trying out the third book because the plot is interesting enough to keep me going though.
Moderate: Cursing
There is a lot of cheesy flirting in this book. One scene has some steamy kissing but nothing past that. There's also a lot of talk about people sleeping around.unicorngirl's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Moderate: Medical content, Kidnapping, Stalking, Pregnancy, and Fire/Fire injury
Minor: Bullying and Cursing
Trigger Warnings: Mention of parent death, Mention of child death, mentions of threats/death threats