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fictionfloozy's review
2.0
The author would be a great poet
The voice of the novel reads more appropriate for a flowery poem than a novel. The lack of dialogue and far too much description and adjectives (some that were use incorrectly such as "brunette eyes") not only slowed the story down but stopped me from liking or caring about the characters or their love lives (not good when the story is a romance). Another editor should take a read because there are also a lot of mistakes including missing words, misplaced words, misused words, (as stated above) and in one instance a made up adjective.
I had looked forward to reading this but was wholly disappointed.
The voice of the novel reads more appropriate for a flowery poem than a novel. The lack of dialogue and far too much description and adjectives (some that were use incorrectly such as "brunette eyes") not only slowed the story down but stopped me from liking or caring about the characters or their love lives (not good when the story is a romance). Another editor should take a read because there are also a lot of mistakes including missing words, misplaced words, misused words, (as stated above) and in one instance a made up adjective.
I had looked forward to reading this but was wholly disappointed.
chrissyp's review against another edition
4.0
There has almost always been a clear choice for me when reading a love triangle. But not with this one. I honestly had so much anxiety trying to decide which man I wanted Claire to choose. They were both so wonderful even though they were complete opposites. In the end, I was very happy with her choice, but I was also sad that the other man was left alone and sad. I wish there had been some glimpse of him finding happiness, but I know that sometimes life doesn't work out that way.
amullen03's review against another edition
3.0
So claire meets Jake in a coffee shop. He plays guitar and she is under his spell. She is happy and just is lost in him. She then tells her foster brother David and un surprisingly he does not take it well. He then shows up the next day and claire finds him after an amazing night with Jake. Things are changing everywhere and she doesnt know what to do. She goes back home to try and find some answers.
The story is fun and reminds me of Neverland. It just has to much description in it. Some things were described for multiple pages and that was just to much. Claire is super annoying and dense until about 3/4 of the way through she actually becomes this amazing woman.
Not bad I would read more
The story is fun and reminds me of Neverland. It just has to much description in it. Some things were described for multiple pages and that was just to much. Claire is super annoying and dense until about 3/4 of the way through she actually becomes this amazing woman.
Not bad I would read more