Reviews

The Right Move by Liz Tomforde

meldellima's review against another edition

emotional funny hopeful lighthearted medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? Yes
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

Me ha gustado bastante la relación de los protas y ver a los demás de fondo. Me ha parecido menos bonita que la primera de la saga.
Tiene puntos extra por lo detallista y precioso que es Ryan y por la Lengua de Signos (?).

elouisereads's review against another edition

emotional funny lighthearted sad medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? Yes
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

gyllatopa's review against another edition

4.0

4.5 -4.75 ⭐️ SOOO much better than the first book. I could not put this book down; The tension between the two character had me HOOKED! Ryan Shay is on a whole other level lol too good to be true

jkeiper5's review against another edition

emotional funny lighthearted fast-paced

3.75

brianad9412's review against another edition

adventurous emotional hopeful lighthearted medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? A mix
• Strong character development? Yes
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? No

5.0

indyyy22's review against another edition

4.0

LISTEN, THIS BOOK IS SO BAD BUT SO GOOD it’s also wayyyyyyyy to damn long

the smuttt

mashleighh's review

emotional funny lighthearted medium-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? A mix
• Strong character development? Yes
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

I love Indy and Ryan’s story the most (so far, need to read the others) in this series. It is funny and sexy and sweet and tugs at your heart in every way, good and bad, though the angst was a little lighter in this one. The story is realistic and relatable for me. The only negative is Ryan Shay sets the bar way too high for men everywhere. Love, love, love this love story. 

lefttoread's review

The Right Move is another easy and enjoyable read from Liz Tomforde, continuing the feel-good romantic vibes from her previous work. Tomforde’s writing remains engaging, and she clearly understands what her readers want to see from a male love interest. However, while her storytelling style shines, this installment felt a bit lacking compared to the first book in the series.

Ryan Shay, the male protagonist, is almost too perfect, to the point where his character becomes a little hard to connect with. The book leans heavily into the idealization of the male love interest, which, while appealing at first, eventually made the story feel a bit too cheesy for my liking. His flawlessness leaves little room for tension or growth in the relationship, which is what makes romance novels truly captivating.

I also found myself less drawn to the couple in The Right Move than I was to the pair from the first book. There was a certain spark or depth that was missing in their dynamic, making it harder to fully invest in their love story.

That being said, it’s still a pleasant read for fans of the genre, and Tomforde’s knack for creating a feel-good romance is undeniable.

lizward92's review against another edition

3.0

Much better than the first.

jacksofhearts's review

adventurous funny hopeful lighthearted fast-paced

• Plot- or character-driven? Character
• Strong character development? It's complicated
• Loveable characters? Yes
• Diverse cast of characters? Yes
• Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

my ultimate fav from the series <33