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Winter of the Owl by Iris Foxglove

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dark emotional hopeful tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

Overall, this was a fantastic read with great chemistry and pacing. There was probably only one major hiccup that got to me, but not enough to ruin the story as a whole.

So in this world, people are literally born either dominant or submissive like it’s a tertiary sex trait. For example, a dominant can compel a submissive to follow their orders. And there’s mentions of spellwork too, though magic doesn’t particularly play any role in this story.

The whump is delicious in both directions. Victor, a submissive, was raised an orphan who never got adopted. He felt unwanted even before he got preyed upon by a gaslighting professor who ground his self-esteem into atoms. And Sava, a dominant, wanted to prove he was strong enough for his lover, but by the time he was ready to make a move, the lover killed himself. Sava blames himself for not being enough for his lover to choose life instead.

Victor and Sava are in forced proximity for the entire winter, and so their feelings for each other begin to simmer. Except neither feels worthy of the other, and you’d expect the mutual pining to keep holding strong when they admit they don’t feel like they deserve each other.

Then Sava immediately makes a move, berating himself for doing it right after trying to convince himself to stay away. He doesn’t understand why Victor would settle for him until it dawns on him that Victor’s low self worth would be the reason he’d be satisfied with a less than worthy mate. Sava decides he will make himself worthy of Victor, who to him is beyond perfect and beyond what he currently deserves.

I’m all sorts of emotional.

I really liked that Victor and Sava have open communication about their feelings. The conflicts that arise end up being them dealing with their respective worth issues and working through it together.

My problem arises with

Ivan’s jealousy issues. I think the story works the way it does only if you completely ignore the parts that indicate polyamory is an option. Listen, I know jealousy can still happen in polyam, that’s not where I’m going with this. The way Ivan acts is as though Sava can have only one mate total. Perhaps I’m misunderstanding the concept of a mated pair welcoming a third, but I would assume the third becomes part of a mated triad. And, in theory, Ivan would still gain access to Sava as a third, whether with Milan or Victor. But Ivan is acting like it’s all or nothing. There’s not even a reasoning for rejecting being a third. So the conflict is very frustrating to witness unless you close your eyes to the existence of polyam in this culture. Additionally, Ivan’s villain monologue at the very end isn’t about to endear him to Sava even if Ivan’s plans came to fruition somehow.

It was too heavy handed and contrived for my taste.

Also, much smaller gripe, the sex scenes feel very rushed. Not enough lingering. Just very utilitarian with word choice. It’s still explicit and serviceable, but I wish it had more on-page weight in the narrative.

But honestly I still had a great time, and I’d want to read more from this author duo under a single name.

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