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t_shaffner's review against another edition
3.0
This felt like an interesting intro to a story, or a full book, cut down to the outline. Fun enough, but not much there.
maggiebook's review against another edition
5.0
Excellent Sci-Fi short story that also shows how people with the know how and a purpose will thrive when bureaucracy and political influence are removed. Great narration.
julievireadsalot's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? N/A
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
bethankyou's review against another edition
5.0
Good read
For such a short story, this is really complete. I enjoyed reading it, and while a longer version would be great because I like the author's style a lot, this short one was very satisfying.
For such a short story, this is really complete. I enjoyed reading it, and while a longer version would be great because I like the author's style a lot, this short one was very satisfying.
lyriclorelei's review against another edition
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
3.0
I didn't really get connected to the characters in this which is what really would've sold it.
emmaccate's review against another edition
adventurous
hopeful
reflective
relaxing
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.25
quiss42's review against another edition
3.0
This is not a "Short Story" - it's an excerpt.
Even for a "short story" it is way too short. In addition, there's no edge or surprise that might turn it into something interesting - just a 44 minute read which can be summarized in a few lines (see below) and doesn't even have a proper ending. It might have worked as the introduction to something longer, but not as a standalone tale.
Audio book: Nevertheless, the narrator does a good job.
Story summary:
1. Captain wakes up from hibernation after reaching planet to deploy settlers on
2. Planet is not as good as expected
3. Settlers are to be deployed anyway, following the contract
4. Settlers revolt - captain is tazered - settlers win
5. Captain wakes up from hibernation and finds himself in a well functioning colony. The End(?)
Even for a "short story" it is way too short. In addition, there's no edge or surprise that might turn it into something interesting - just a 44 minute read which can be summarized in a few lines (see below) and doesn't even have a proper ending. It might have worked as the introduction to something longer, but not as a standalone tale.
Audio book: Nevertheless, the narrator does a good job.
Story summary:
Spoiler
1. Captain wakes up from hibernation after reaching planet to deploy settlers on
2. Planet is not as good as expected
3. Settlers are to be deployed anyway, following the contract
4. Settlers revolt - captain is tazered - settlers win
5. Captain wakes up from hibernation and finds himself in a well functioning colony. The End(?)
penguinreporter's review against another edition
adventurous
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
5.0