saucemallow's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
Minor: Sexual content
takarakei's review against another edition
Graphic: Blood and Violence
Moderate: Torture and Death of parent
Minor: Sexual content, Animal cruelty, and Sexual assault
crufts's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
But when the young Princess Amora steps up for the crowning test of her soul magic, disaster strikes and Amora is forced to flee her home. Befriending a pirate and sailing amongst the islands of Visidia, can she uncover the curse that plagues her family?
The book was okay. I definitely liked the premise and fantasy aspects, with the chain of magic islands and their magical specialties. The mermaid character was also great and lived up to the fantastical and terrifying legends.
I also felt that the expectations set up at the beginning of the book are satisfactorily addressed by the end. For example, at the beginning of the book when we hear the
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glorified children's story about the founding of the kingdomFinally, I thought the way the Big Bad was approached was quite interesting, as
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even though his motivations were revealed as good, Amora was still not satisfied with his plans, refused to concede to him, and is determined to lead the kingdom in her own wayIn terms of pacing, it was perfect. I always felt the plot moved at a good speed and that things were happening on time.
Character-wise, I initially liked Amora. She's not a stereotypical delicate waif princess; instead, she is physically strong, brave, and her dedication to saving her kingdom is endearing.
However, I started getting annoyed with her in certain scenes, such as
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when Bastian reveals that Kaven is his brother, and she sanctimoniously tells him "I forgive you". It was Bastian's choice as to whether or not to reveal this - what on earth is she forgiving him for?Amora was so comfortable pulling rank as princess that she had no qualms about acting coldly towards her subjects, e.g.
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had her coronationI also had trouble with the flowery writing style. There are a lot of protracted internal dialogues and descriptions, most of which I ended up skimming over. Some dialogue is also rather melodramatic and over-the-top, e.g.
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during Bastian's confession, when he's saying "I don't deserve your forgiveness. I don't deserve anyone's" despite the fact that he did nothing wrongAnother issue was the way the author continually used the names of gems when referring to colours. This led to misunderstandings where I first thought people were actually bedecked in gems, when they were just wearing coloured clothes. For example:
A man in amethyst lunges for us ...
a time-wielding Ker in deep amethyst
The crowd before us is a shifting wave of black, pinks and reds, greens and blues--and even white--that stills as we approach. But there's no amethyst.
A woman ... dons a Suntosan emerald cape
A little blond girl ... singes the edge of her ruby shawl.
If the author simply wanted to use some more interesting words for these colours, some alternate options are charcoal, slate-grey, crimson, vermillion, golden, verdigris-green, sky-blue, lavender, periwinkle, azure, bone-white, cerise, nut-brown, etc.
The conclusion of the book was rather jarring since it ends in a series of sudden twists, reveals, and changes. We're talking 10+ twists, e.g.
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Bastian is now the curse object for Amora's soul, King Audric suddenly has the ability to use his soul magic to create a "soul room" to speak to Amora, Ferrick has stopped pining over Amora within the span of a few days, Amora has changed her mind about revealing the truth to her kingdom and is content to keep secrets from them, etcDespite my complaints, the overall aesthetic of the book is very Young Adult, it's a decent YA setup, and YA fans will probably enjoy it regardless. At times it feels like a dozen YA tropes blended into one novel, but if you enjoy YA tropes, that's not a bad thing.
Graphic: Death and Violence
Moderate: Gore, Trafficking, and Blood
Minor: Sexual content and Alcohol
Violence, Death, Gore: Appears occasionally, including dismemberment of limbs.Trafficking: A mythical creature is being kept as a trafficked slave.
Blood: A character's menstruation ruins her trousers.
Alcohol: The main characters get drunk.
Sexual content: Fade-to-black between the main character and another character.
planetshelf's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.0
However, it isn’t bad, and the audiobook was very well done.
Graphic: Alcohol, Blood, Gore, Injury/Injury detail, Murder, and Violence
Minor: Sexual content
tiffsbookjourney's review against another edition
3.75
However, the ending and the epilogue felt a bit rushed and felt like it lacked depth.
Also the narrator for the audiobook wasn't it for me.
Graphic: Violence, Gore, Blood, War, Torture, Murder, Injury/Injury detail, and Death
Minor: Sexual content
ka_ke's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Graphic: Classism, Grief, Misogyny, Blood, Death, Fire/Fire injury, Murder, Violence, and Death of parent
Minor: Torture, Sexual content, Trafficking, and Self harm
angstifies's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Graphic: Blood, Body horror, Violence, Death, and Gore
Moderate: Suicide and Death of parent
Minor: Misogyny, Sexual content, Sexual assault, Alcohol, and Confinement
jojo_'s review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
Graphic: Blood, Toxic relationship, Violence, Death, Injury/Injury detail, Animal cruelty, Grief, Murder, and Torture
Moderate: Alcohol, Emotional abuse, Death of parent, Sexual content, and War
Minor: Trafficking, Cannibalism, and Confinement
thatbookishworm's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Graphic: Blood, Gore, Violence, and Death
Moderate: Death of parent and Grief
Minor: Sexual content and Sexual harassment
offbrandclubsoda's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.5
The world building was decent, though the explanation of soul magic was a bit confusing and hard to follow. There was some info-dumping at the beginning which always turns me off a bit, but it wasn’t unforgivable.
I thought the plot was somewhat rushed, and I especially thought the romance was built up too quickly and didn’t feel real to me. I like when the author makes me work for it haha
I was disappointed that mermaids weren’t more involved in the plot.
In one sentence, I would say the book has a similar vibe to a Court of Thorns and Roses, but not as good.
Spice level: 🌶🌶/5
Specific to the audiobook:
I want to preface this by saying that I absolutely love audiobooks, so a negative review is rare from me. Unfortunately, I strongly disliked the narration of this book and would recommend skipping the audiobook. The narrator seemed too focused on creating different voices for each character, and ended up making most of them sounds incredibly annoying…I also noticed some weird editing where it was obvious that different takes had been spliced together. Finally, the narrator’s constant pronunciation of silent G’s grated my nerves the entire book. (“ding-Guh-y”, “sing-Guh-ing”, etc).
Graphic: Blood and Torture
Moderate: Violence, Body horror, Fire/Fire injury, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Sexual content, Sexism, Slavery, Colonisation, Toxic relationship, War, Death of parent, Death, Trafficking, Medical content, and Alcohol