ogrezed's review
4.0
Oh my goodness, is this book in need of a few serious rounds of proofreading. Numerous incorrect words (e.g. defiantly instead of definitely a number of times) and frequent poor punctuation. Especially on dialog. A little more character development would help as well, especially when going to the length of a novel.
However, in spite of those issues, I loved the story. It was fast paced, and a real page turner. And I liked that the main characters put a little thought and planning behind their actions.
I'll definitely be tuning in for the follow-up novel that is promised. But, PLEASE, take more time on editing and proofreading.
However, in spite of those issues, I loved the story. It was fast paced, and a real page turner. And I liked that the main characters put a little thought and planning behind their actions.
I'll definitely be tuning in for the follow-up novel that is promised. But, PLEASE, take more time on editing and proofreading.
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