kikiandarrowsfishshelf's review
1.0
Let me say that I think Donna Burgess can write. I have read several of her short fiction. It's really good. My problem with this book isn't the writing, it is the format or editing. I can't figure out which it is, but words at the end of sentences are left out. I think it's formatting, considering this was an early work. Whatever the reason, I found it to be very distracting, so much to the point I couldn't finish the novel.
Note: I will be checking to see if the novel gets updated or refreshed. The story was interesting.
Note: I will be checking to see if the novel gets updated or refreshed. The story was interesting.
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