freelunch's review
4.0
Lets start with things I didn't like about this story.
Forced feminization is not my kink. Cross-dressing can be hot, but anything more is usually a turn-off for me. Also, the reveal that Alan and Annabelle were adopted felt a little too bait'n'switch to me.
I've gotten my complaints out of the way up front because either of these elements could easily have caused me to abandon the story, both of them together should certainly have done so. But Naomi writes this well enough that I liked the twins and bought into their story.
The party scene felt plausible in the way ridiculous porn scenes can, and the sex is hot with lots of participants (some unidentified by the twins, some very *familiar* to them), and everything is wonderfully messy and *fluid*.
The story ends with the family going into pandemic lockdown and the promise of more to come. I'll be there for it.
Forced feminization is not my kink. Cross-dressing can be hot, but anything more is usually a turn-off for me. Also, the reveal that Alan and Annabelle were adopted felt a little too bait'n'switch to me.
I've gotten my complaints out of the way up front because either of these elements could easily have caused me to abandon the story, both of them together should certainly have done so. But Naomi writes this well enough that I liked the twins and bought into their story.
The party scene felt plausible in the way ridiculous porn scenes can, and the sex is hot with lots of participants (some unidentified by the twins, some very *familiar* to them), and everything is wonderfully messy and *fluid*.
The story ends with the family going into pandemic lockdown and the promise of more to come. I'll be there for it.
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