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poetsofsweetpea's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Child abuse, Child death, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Mental illness, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Torture, Kidnapping, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Abandonment, Alcohol, and Sexual harassment
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship, Confinement, Infidelity, and Dysphoria
tyiennasreads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Graphic: Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Mental illness, Pedophilia, Physical abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, and Sexual violence
tkatt20's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
To start off, the pacing was horrendous. A good 75% of this book is fluffy filler of the main characters agonizing over one another with not an ounce of communication in sight. The other 25% had the potential for some plot with a good storyline, but was so overshadowed by the googly eyes between the two. Like if we had spent a little more time on world development and filling out the characters this could have been a solid romantasy novel, I mean the idea is there, the execution not so much.
Speaking of characters, these characters were so cliché. I mean, a broody fae king who's hundreds of years old and rules the "dark" side of the fae relm and a 23ish year old girl (also 16 through half of it but ill talk about that later) with magical powers and a tortured past. I think we've read this before, no? We had the makings for such a badass main lead but did we get that? No. Instead we got a girl who's so codependent on the mmc she couldn't have any other successful relationships for 7 YEARS while he was gone. Which by the way, they met when she was 16 where she took one look at him and become obsessed and he didn't have enough will power and morality to tell her how inappropriate it was, and actually fed into her obsession with him by teasing and making suggestive comments to her for the next year as we're told by the far too many flashbacks. If that doesn't smell like grooming I don't know what does.
By the time I got to the end I was so over everything I actually laughed at the speed of which the fmc actually put together the clues and found out who the villain is. For being a PI she certainly doesn't pick up on much and that so just so disappointing. Dont act like a strong female lead if youre just going to lay there and play damsel in distress. The ending was so sloppy and thrown together I felt like I blinked and it was all resolved. Im sure that there are more answers in the later books but im not even sure I care to keep reading im so disappointing by this. It gets 2 stars for the very few things I did like in this book, I mean it wasn't the worst I've read, but I'm just so frustrated by everything that I can't even come up with something I like right now.
Also, I have also decided that I can't do Urban Fantasy because if I read another half baked Harry Potter reference I'm going to scream.
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Rape, Sexual assault, and Sexual content
Moderate: Gore, Mental illness, and Murder
Minor: Alcoholism, Child abuse, and Death of parent
bee_thebee's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
it kind of is a no plot just vibes kinda book but the little bit of plot that we had was enough to make me sob so yeah✌️ SOLID AS STONE four star read
ps the romance buildup was amazing like seven years, SEVEN FUCKING GODDAYMN YEARS
Graphic: Sexual content and Blood
Moderate: Alcoholism, Bullying, Mental illness, and Kidnapping
Minor: Rape, Sexual assault, and Murder
wrensreadingroom's review against another edition
5.0
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Animal death, Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Child death, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Gore, Mental illness, Misogyny, Panic attacks/disorders, Pedophilia, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexism, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Toxic relationship, Violence, Forced institutionalization, Blood, Vomit, Medical content, Kidnapping, Grief, Stalking, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Gaslighting, Abandonment, Alcohol, Sexual harassment, War, and Injury/Injury detail
katievallin's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.0
Graphic: Cursing, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Violence, Trafficking, Kidnapping, and Grief
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship, Child abuse, Mental illness, Pedophilia, Rape, Blood, Stalking, Murder, and Alcohol
Minor: Bullying and Death of parent
rubyslippers96's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.75
Moderate: Rape, Blood, and Death of parent
Minor: Mental illness, Grief, and Murder
hq_reads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
I enjoyed the plot as well, I though the scene in the nursery was really creepy and the author did a great job of creating a tense atmosphere during the moment with the Thief. It was a perfect balance of disturbing and mysterious and I’m excited to see where the story goes.
🌶️🌶️🌶️/5 for spice - it was quite good. The slow burn was great and I absolutely swooned when he said “you didn’t think the king of night would just be gentle did you?” 😮💨🥵
Graphic: Child abuse, Confinement, Pedophilia, Rape, Sexual assault, Sexual content, Sexual violence, Kidnapping, and Alcohol
Moderate: Adult/minor relationship and Mental illness
Minor: Pregnancy
danib24's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.0
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship, Child abuse, Mental illness, Rape, Sexual assault, Kidnapping, and Death of parent
paigeofstories's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.25
Spice: 🌶️🌶️ a couple of vanilla spicy scenes that are described
TW: ⚠️ sexual assault, child abuse and grooming (I don’t care that she says 16 is the legal age, it’s still creepy)
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Interesting concept, disappointing execution.
The worst parts of the book:
• I do not care that the MCs didn’t technically touch in a sexual manner until the FMC was of legal age, the relationship they developed while she was SIXTEEN was creepy and disturbing. It was child grooming and if you disagree, I’ll fight you on this one. He could have walked away and came back when she was older, but he continued to give in to the FMC (bringing her alcohol, enabling her solitude—I mean, she only made a friend once he left for “good”, and more). I would have put this book down if I wasn’t trying to finish everything I start this year. I hate that this is such a commonly accepted thing in fantasy fiction (I mean, even Stephanie Meyer managed to add it in at the end of her Twilight series with Jacob and Renaissance). I’m tired of it and it’s 100% the reason I will not be finishing the series.
• So much gratuitous sexual assault and reference to it. Listen, I’m tired. I won’t include spoilers here, but I just wish authors could be a little bit more creative instead of relying on this age-old, damaging af trope.
• The characterization of Temper. As the best friend of our FMC, Temper had so much potential (as we rarely see FMCs with living best friends in fantasy). But Thalassa really dropped the ball by turning her into a caricature of a black woman who begins every sentence with “bitch”. I was particularly disappointed with this because Thalassa’s Four Horsemen series has fairly well-written diversity, so the decision to tokenize the only black character in this novel simply to check off a box was a particularly harsh let-down.
• Karnon. I can’t decide if I hate this more because his entire villain arc stands on the stilts of mental health, as Thalassa uses dissociative identity disorder to justify the raping of hundreds of women (and poorly, at that) or if its because I’m over the person associated with animals and the woods being the one to fly into an uncontrollable rage (see: outdated, damaging caricatures of Natives). Again, I’m tired.
• This is the last thing on my list because I feel like it could be a factor that changes over Callie’s character arc, but I really didn’t like that the FMC saw her sexuality as a separate being contained inside of her. Callie can’t decide if sexuality is shameful or not, and it’s inconsistent at best… but channeling her magic doesn’t change her into a different person in most circumstances. Therefore, logically, “the siren” shouldn’t be a different person within her in sexual situations, despite Callie and Des both referencing her as such. Again, this is definitely something that I could see Callie coming to terms with over the course of the trilogy, though.
The things I did like:
• I think the powers that the characters had were interesting and wanted to see more of that. The disturbing (yet boring) reveal at the end would have been more interesting if the FMC had actually used her siren abilities instead of just saying something along the lines of “wow, it would be over for you guys if I used my siren abilities” before sitting back and waiting for the MC to swoop in and rescue her. Yawn.
• I loved the FMC’s job, and was severely disappointed that Thalassa didn’t include more details from it. The job itself went so well with the rest of the mystery plot that it seemed like a missed opportunity for her to not explore that further. Maybe that changes in later books, but I won’t be sticking around to find out.
• I loved the concept of The Bargainer and the favors, so I wish we could have seen more of that in action as well.
I feel like I should say something about how this feels like a cheaper version of ACOTAR, but honestly, so are so many other dark fantasies these days that it isn’t even worth diving into. IMO, though, it didn’t hold up to the GOAT.
Conclusion:
The worldbuilding and mystery was what kept me reading, as I kept hoping that we were going to get more of both. However, to say I was disappointed with how it ended would be an understatement. I was really looking forward to diving into another one of Thalassa’s works because I enjoyed her Four Horsemen series so much… but this was not it.
Graphic: Adult/minor relationship and Child abuse
Moderate: Confinement, Mental illness, and Sexual assault