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shaunaloui's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
lighthearted
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Loveable characters? Yes
4.0
I really enjoyed this book! Totally devoured it and read it in one sitting!
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual violence, Violence, and Murder
mooninda82's review against another edition
4.0
fab book
This was a really good mc read, I loved Ella’s character and the way she dealt with everything thrown her way. Damien was a great rough alpha character. The story has some suspense, heat and humour. I’m looking forward to reading book 2 x
This was a really good mc read, I loved Ella’s character and the way she dealt with everything thrown her way. Damien was a great rough alpha character. The story has some suspense, heat and humour. I’m looking forward to reading book 2 x
megmegz's review against another edition
2.0
Loved the storyline but the writing style just wasn’t for me unfortunately
ash_chooses_pikachu's review against another edition
1.0
The concept sounded interesting but the execution was awful, just AWFUL. The writing style was like a bot was given an automatic story generator and some old harlequin books as reference so it just wrote everything in a monotonous drone. Talk about telling and not showing. Everything was dull and robotic af.
sedaniels's review against another edition
2.0
Nope
This isn’t a first person story. It’s a narrative. A step by step “so then we did” whatever. Maybe it’s a first draft. As a first draft it has potential…as a final draft published book? Not so much. The idea itself is my jam. The implementation is just not there, which is such a shame.
We meet characters in the prologue and are told what happens. We’re shown nothing and the medical information could have been correct with a quick google search but hey it doesn’t matter because this is fiction, right?
Onto the first chapter where a biker is telling us snippets of his story but it’s a clash of present and past tense. Please. Pick one. And sure, I understand bending the rules of reality for a story, but at least pretend an effort was made.
Maybe it improved, I don’t know, but I’m also not going to find out.
This isn’t a first person story. It’s a narrative. A step by step “so then we did” whatever. Maybe it’s a first draft. As a first draft it has potential…as a final draft published book? Not so much. The idea itself is my jam. The implementation is just not there, which is such a shame.
We meet characters in the prologue and are told what happens. We’re shown nothing and the medical information could have been correct with a quick google search but hey it doesn’t matter because this is fiction, right?
Onto the first chapter where a biker is telling us snippets of his story but it’s a clash of present and past tense. Please. Pick one. And sure, I understand bending the rules of reality for a story, but at least pretend an effort was made.
Maybe it improved, I don’t know, but I’m also not going to find out.
smittycat's review against another edition
- Diverse cast of characters? No
2.0
Re-read. I remember liking this book. More than it deserves. It needs some good copy editing. Not a bad storylin . Clunky writing.
lilmooniex's review against another edition
funny
hopeful
lighthearted
relaxing
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
5.0
Spoiler filled review / description:
Damien had given his sperm after a car accident to make sure his semen was still viable but there had been a mix up after the accident, they had kept it and accidentally inseminated the wrong woman. Ella and Jeff had been trying for a baby for years before he found out he has low sperm count, after she had offically gotten pregnant with a donor's sperm (they didn't care whose it was, they were from foster care families and were ready to spoil their little one) he fell off the curb and got hit by a car. She didn't have any other family other than the baby since Jeff died on impact. Damien had a dead beat dad and isn't planning on going anywhere. Ella's mom died from Cancer when she was still a kid causing her to go into foster care. Damien is a MC biker and even though Ella is pregnant, he doesn't intend on settling, but he sure as hell is going to be in his kid's life. They finally meet and neither are disappointed. He is vice president of the MC and his prez finally wants to meet Ella. Damien invites Ella to family day, no club whores allowed. The prez had a kid with someone years ago and she dipped when he was on the run, after Damien brings her to the club house she pulls out an old photo that looks like a young prez, opening up worms that Prez is her dad and she finally discovered who he was after her death. Bianca (Ella's mom) couldn't stand back and watch Prez with Lilly, his old lady. They let her know she is extra special because she is the club's princess (Prez's daughter) and carrying Damien (VP's) baby. An arch MC enemy said Ella's mom sold her to him when she was pregnant and dipped before he could collect and that he was going to take his time breaking her. They admit they have feelings for one another. Ella says she isn't ready for anything serious just yet because of her husband but she doesn't want Damien fucking with anyone else either if he wants her. He professes he wants her to be his old lady. Demon the MC enemy fucked and killed the whores belonging to Damien's MC before they were cast out for being rude to Ella. 2 weeks after Ella has the baby Demon takes her from the hospital from her post op appointment, he did not make light of his promises. Their relationship grows and so does the tension, he doesn't push her to do anymore than she can handle since losing her husband. Damien waits on her to make the first move to touch, suck, and to initiate sex. As the years go on Demon finally kidnaps her but they get into a car accident and Ella's MC club works tirelessly to save her. In the end Damien wants Ella as his old lady and gets her knocked up again after a year. Everyone is excited and are happy to welcome in a new baby and openly welcomed Ella where she belonged in the MC. Ella's mom is the real mf villian she let her go to foster care instead of letting her dad know about Ella, just out of jealousy of Lilly.
An Adorable apple juice loving MC. It was just a sweet love story, kind've surrounded by tragedy but definitely with a beautiful ending - it came with patience. Pretty short read I binged it quickly and forgot my little world for a day. I definitely can understand the drops in reviews for the writing / editing style it could use a little cleaning up BUT if you keep going honestly I adored it. It was such a cute fast book, different than what I am used to but I am so happy I gave this book a chance personally.
An Adorable apple juice loving MC. It was just a sweet love story, kind've surrounded by tragedy but definitely with a beautiful ending - it came with patience. Pretty short read I binged it quickly and forgot my little world for a day. I definitely can understand the drops in reviews for the writing / editing style it could use a little cleaning up BUT if you keep going honestly I adored it. It was such a cute fast book, different than what I am used to but I am so happy I gave this book a chance personally.
lauren91's review against another edition
2.0
2 stars
I read the whole book but I’m not in any rush to carry on the series. It was a good storyline but I didn’t emotionally connect at all to the characters.
I read the whole book but I’m not in any rush to carry on the series. It was a good storyline but I didn’t emotionally connect at all to the characters.
mooncricketjp's review against another edition
3.0
Good
I really liked the premise of the book though it was unbelievable at times. The characters were also great and the family atmosphere was awesome. The writing was quite rough. A lot of repetition and typos. I see the author’s potential and plan on checking out more, though.
I really liked the premise of the book though it was unbelievable at times. The characters were also great and the family atmosphere was awesome. The writing was quite rough. A lot of repetition and typos. I see the author’s potential and plan on checking out more, though.