The design and UX isn't done, Rob and Abbie, okkurrrr! 😌
kloughlin's review
adventurous
funny
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
4.5
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Violence, Injury/Injury detail, Slavery, and Trafficking
Minor: Death of parent
beebookcandle's review against another edition
adventurous
funny
lighthearted
relaxing
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
2.5
It was ok. The writing was annoying - choppy sentences that would have been better if combined was my primary issue. Some dialogue or descriptions didn't make any sense together side by side due to the choppiness and adhd level writing. Not the worst I've read but, elementary for sure. Got too cliche and cheesey and lost it's interesting aspects pretty quickly with the insta-love. Contrary to popular smut (that is poorly written) trends ... you don't have to name the anatomy every time. Also the word "crotch", much like the other C-word, is really not a sexy word. Come on.Â
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Gun violence, Slavery, Violence, and Abandonment
Minor: War and Medical content
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