krisz's review against another edition
4.0
I really liked the tone of this novella. It made me really feel with the character and go along the story!
However I found the plot with the guy somehow lacking. It would have helped if heroine actually lets us think she cares for this guy and still finds him irresistable. She acted in an I-don't-care way about him, even toward the readers, so I had no clue she would find a reason and tie up the loose ends with the guy.
Otherwise I loved not only the style but the characters too, except that there were too many for this length of a story.
All in all, well done, next time do your planting better :)
However I found the plot with the guy somehow lacking. It would have helped if heroine actually lets us think she cares for this guy and still finds him irresistable. She acted in an I-don't-care way about him, even toward the readers, so I had no clue she would find a reason and tie up the loose ends with the guy.
Otherwise I loved not only the style but the characters too, except that there were too many for this length of a story.
All in all, well done, next time do your planting better :)
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