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diidd's review
4.0
Enjoyed it
This was a great story. It was let down though by poor editing. Some sentences just didn’t make sense. This is a new to me author, I did really enjoy the storyline and look forward to more from her.
This was a great story. It was let down though by poor editing. Some sentences just didn’t make sense. This is a new to me author, I did really enjoy the storyline and look forward to more from her.
onyerbike's review
DNF @ 80%
Aside from the overwhelming number of spelling, grammatical, and formatting errors (which I'd be willing to overlook if the story was good enough), this isn't for me. Dom Daddies who take pleasure in catching their boys out so they can punish them really fucking annoy me. I don't mind light BDSM elements, but cutting off a guy's air while getting a blowie is NOT up my alley. Too many elements here had me grinding my teeth in annoyance, so it's time to cut my losses. Sorry, Mallow and Whatsyourname, it's not you (well, it kind of is), it's me.
Aside from the overwhelming number of spelling, grammatical, and formatting errors (which I'd be willing to overlook if the story was good enough), this isn't for me. Dom Daddies who take pleasure in catching their boys out so they can punish them really fucking annoy me. I don't mind light BDSM elements, but cutting off a guy's air while getting a blowie is NOT up my alley. Too many elements here had me grinding my teeth in annoyance, so it's time to cut my losses. Sorry, Mallow and Whatsyourname, it's not you (well, it kind of is), it's me.
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