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The Dark Portal, by Robin Jarvis

squishies's review against another edition

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3.0

3.5 stars

Oh sweet Jesus Christ... This book is macabre plus plus. Jeebus. I'm quite sure this is the only YA book that I've consistently have muttered, "oh, what the fuck!".

SpoilerI was SO sure that Jupiter was an evil mouse, but a freaking CAT?! GEEZ!!! Gotta love that twist.

thistlechaser's review against another edition

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1.0

I love talking animal stories. This one, about a bunch of mice that fight against a bunch of bad guy rats, should have been a perfect for for me. However, all the characters had very strong accents and they were all written out. I do not enjoy that. DNF

amy1980's review against another edition

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5.0

As brilliant as I remember it being when I was a kid!

cstar12's review against another edition

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4.0

Well, I haven't finished it yet but it sEems like a great book. I highly reccomend it so far

meghanc303's review against another edition

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4.0

Notes from my childhood review:
-my favorite character is Twit
-this book is not but to Redwall standards but it is wonderful

rainbowrachel's review against another edition

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2.0

This was one of my favourites when I read it as a pre-teen and teenager, but reading it now just left me completely cold. I can still imagine circumstances where I'd recommend it for its target audience, but contrary to other reviews, I just don't see what this one offers to an adult.

jojobug's review against another edition

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adventurous dark fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.5

mes91's review against another edition

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adventurous dark fast-paced

4.0

roary47's review against another edition

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4.0

Wow, my oldest nephew let me borrow this book a long time ago. I never had or took the chance to read it, but then he suggested we read it out loud together since he was rereading his older books. I would not suggest this book to younger audiences since there is a lot or really scary nightmare inducing stuff for the young, but this book was incredible in plot and delivery.

kailey_luminouslibro's review against another edition

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2.0

I had to DNF this one. It's boring, and the plot is trite, and the pacing is weird. I didn't care about any of the characters, so after I stuck with it through 100 pages, I called it quits.

The writing is really condescending, and points out the obvious over and over. In the beginning, the setting is described as a society of mice who are afraid of the sewers below their community because the evil rats live in the sewers and they eat any poor mice who go wandering down there.
Then a mouse named Albert is lured into the sewers, and the author thinks they need to tell me and explain again and again that Albert is afraid. He's afraid of the sewers because there are ravenous rats in the sewers. He's afraid of the rats because the rats capture and eat mice. Albert is afraid.
OMG, don't tell me 50 times that Albert is afraid. I can deduce that very well for myself!

That's probably why I couldn't connect with any of the characters, because I wasn't allowed to just feel the emotions of the characters through the story; I was TOLD the character's emotions, and that gets annoying really fast.

The pacing felt jarring and strange. One minute the characters are fleeing for their lives, and then we cut to a scene of a momma mouse with her little mouslings having cake a festival. The story didn't flow very well from scene to scene.

I've heard this compared to Redwall. No, no, no! Redwall actually has good writing and interesting characters.