its_justine's review against another edition
4.0
After being introduced to Briz and Bayla: The Bronze Age Bounty Hunters through Kickstarter with mention that “an alpha reader has referred to [it] as Assassin’s Creed meets the Boondock Saints”, I knew I couldn’t pass this one up. This is the first book I’ve read by author Jeramy Goble and without knowing what to really expect, I’m excited he has created a solid foundation for Moving Targets, a series I believe has a bright future ahead of it.
The story takes us across the Mediterranean from the diverse islands of Greece onto the sweltering sands of Egypt, as a man seeking to fulfill a bounty and a girl on a quest for vengeance cross paths and embark on a journey that will undeniably change both their lives forever. Agreeing to help each other achieve their own goals, they learn their pasts may not be so different, as they’ve both faced crushing loss that has paved their roads to the present. After encountering an enigmatic people in the desert, they soon find themselves embroiled in a plot of intrigue over the unification of Egypt, facing deception at every turn. When they believe they’ve reached the end of their journey, confronting who they believe is responsible for the murders of Bayla’s family, they’re thrown into a whole new world of magic, gods, and a secret war that has been raging from time immemorial.
The tale is told through two separate first-person points of view, each with a voice so initially distinctive - Briz, the selfish bounty hunter with a mind for only monetary gain and Bayla, the selfless magic-wielding orphan, always seeking to do the right thing. While the two outwardly appear as polar opposites, the balance created in their wake changes them both for the better, making them the ideal pair. Both haunted by pain, they each provide the other the strength needed to endure.
Although the path of vengeance is usually portrayed as being bathed in blood and despair, this story is surprisingly clean and hopeful. While pulling motivation from the darker trends of storytelling, it refuses to descend into the grim and bleak, which I certainly found refreshing. Highly descriptive fight scenes and beautifully painted action dominate a good portion of the book, but the real bloody bits are omitted, allowing the reader to remain focused on the adventure itself. And what an adventure it is! Mysticism is interweaved into an alternate history of our own ancient civilizations, adopting and utilizing documented cultures and religions to create something truly wondrous.
I will admit I found the beginning to be a bit rocky, but Bayla’s first encounter with Briz proved to be a major turning point for me, bringing a whole new depth to the story. The unexpected magical twists and turns not only increase the scope of this fantastical world Goble has created, but also brought about a whole feeling of wonder I so often associate with this time period and area of the world. I’m really looking forward to seeing where this duo ends up next, because that epilogue definitely had me craving for more.
The story takes us across the Mediterranean from the diverse islands of Greece onto the sweltering sands of Egypt, as a man seeking to fulfill a bounty and a girl on a quest for vengeance cross paths and embark on a journey that will undeniably change both their lives forever. Agreeing to help each other achieve their own goals, they learn their pasts may not be so different, as they’ve both faced crushing loss that has paved their roads to the present. After encountering an enigmatic people in the desert, they soon find themselves embroiled in a plot of intrigue over the unification of Egypt, facing deception at every turn. When they believe they’ve reached the end of their journey, confronting who they believe is responsible for the murders of Bayla’s family, they’re thrown into a whole new world of magic, gods, and a secret war that has been raging from time immemorial.
The tale is told through two separate first-person points of view, each with a voice so initially distinctive - Briz, the selfish bounty hunter with a mind for only monetary gain and Bayla, the selfless magic-wielding orphan, always seeking to do the right thing. While the two outwardly appear as polar opposites, the balance created in their wake changes them both for the better, making them the ideal pair. Both haunted by pain, they each provide the other the strength needed to endure.
Although the path of vengeance is usually portrayed as being bathed in blood and despair, this story is surprisingly clean and hopeful. While pulling motivation from the darker trends of storytelling, it refuses to descend into the grim and bleak, which I certainly found refreshing. Highly descriptive fight scenes and beautifully painted action dominate a good portion of the book, but the real bloody bits are omitted, allowing the reader to remain focused on the adventure itself. And what an adventure it is! Mysticism is interweaved into an alternate history of our own ancient civilizations, adopting and utilizing documented cultures and religions to create something truly wondrous.
I will admit I found the beginning to be a bit rocky, but Bayla’s first encounter with Briz proved to be a major turning point for me, bringing a whole new depth to the story. The unexpected magical twists and turns not only increase the scope of this fantastical world Goble has created, but also brought about a whole feeling of wonder I so often associate with this time period and area of the world. I’m really looking forward to seeing where this duo ends up next, because that epilogue definitely had me craving for more.
kittyg's review
3.0
*My first read for #SPFBO 2019 and I enjoyed it!*
This book was the first of 30 that I plan to read over the next few months as part of the #SPFBO competition for 2019. I chose this one first purely because the name sounded like it could be the start of a good light-hearted series, and it was exactly that. I also through that the premise of Egypt and Ios as a backdrop to the story would allow a little variation on a classic Western story, and again I think the book delivered.
This story is told in two parts, we have Briz, a bounty-hunter with a lot of experience hunting beasts and looking out for himself, and we have Bayla, a young woman who sees her family cruelly slain in front of her and embarks on a quest for vengeance. I must admit I liked Bayla more than Briz at first, but by the end of the story they are both likeable and I found an affection for both of them and their reasoning and actions.
One thing to note is that the book, to me, feels aimed at a younger reader and I think this largely comes from the writing which is quite quick and simple. There's nothing flowery here, it's all just an adventure, and I liked that it added to the tension and the drama by just showing the events as they unfolded.
A minor quibble I had was with the grammar, there were a lot of instances where punctuation was missed on opening quotation marks and occasionally I think the edit could have been stronger, but these are minor and only drew the eye because I am an editor by day.
Overall, I liked the setting and the story and even though it was a fast read and didn't feel like it was super different to a lot of others I have read, it did feel like a lot of fun and I enjoyed my time reading it. I think I would happily read more from the series as it ends with a promise of more to come, and I enjoyed the resolution even if it felt rather fast and a little bit deus ex machina. 3*s from me.
This book was the first of 30 that I plan to read over the next few months as part of the #SPFBO competition for 2019. I chose this one first purely because the name sounded like it could be the start of a good light-hearted series, and it was exactly that. I also through that the premise of Egypt and Ios as a backdrop to the story would allow a little variation on a classic Western story, and again I think the book delivered.
This story is told in two parts, we have Briz, a bounty-hunter with a lot of experience hunting beasts and looking out for himself, and we have Bayla, a young woman who sees her family cruelly slain in front of her and embarks on a quest for vengeance. I must admit I liked Bayla more than Briz at first, but by the end of the story they are both likeable and I found an affection for both of them and their reasoning and actions.
One thing to note is that the book, to me, feels aimed at a younger reader and I think this largely comes from the writing which is quite quick and simple. There's nothing flowery here, it's all just an adventure, and I liked that it added to the tension and the drama by just showing the events as they unfolded.
A minor quibble I had was with the grammar, there were a lot of instances where punctuation was missed on opening quotation marks and occasionally I think the edit could have been stronger, but these are minor and only drew the eye because I am an editor by day.
Overall, I liked the setting and the story and even though it was a fast read and didn't feel like it was super different to a lot of others I have read, it did feel like a lot of fun and I enjoyed my time reading it. I think I would happily read more from the series as it ends with a promise of more to come, and I enjoyed the resolution even if it felt rather fast and a little bit deus ex machina. 3*s from me.
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