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drbuffyfanify's review
emotional
tense
medium-paced
2.5
While the story had potential, the edits were non-existent. I am usually not a stickler when it comes to grammar and spelling but this was so bad that it became distracting. There were several parts where I didn't know what was even happening because of the word errors.
It's a dual POV story but it was confusing. At times, we would get a recap of events from both sides and others would continue to push the narrative forward. At the start of each chapter, I would have liked to have known if the POV was a revisit or not. Otherwise it was a bit jarring.
It's a dual POV story but it was confusing. At times, we would get a recap of events from both sides and others would continue to push the narrative forward. At the start of each chapter, I would have liked to have known if the POV was a revisit or not. Otherwise it was a bit jarring.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Gore, Sexual content, Kidnapping, Murder, and Pregnancy
Moderate: Toxic relationship and War
Minor: Death of parent
taryngoehrig's review
adventurous
fast-paced
1.5
I got this for free on stuff your kindle day and it was fun but the writing needs a lot of work. Too many ideas, none of them are fully fleshed out enough.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Sexual content and War
Moderate: Rape
salema's review
This book has serious consent issues. After keeping her hostage, the MMC literally drugs her to take her virginity and then beats the crap out her while doing it. She’s sore the next morning and has no memory of having sex, but upon seeing her bruises is so happy about. I just can’t…
Content Warnings
Graphic: Confinement
Moderate: Physical abuse
kaiyamun's review
1.0
dnf at around 50%
the writing was horrible, terrible characters, terrible story progression. it was all around bad, confusing, and extremely awkward. i couldn’t bear to finish this book.
the writing was horrible, terrible characters, terrible story progression. it was all around bad, confusing, and extremely awkward. i couldn’t bear to finish this book.
yoopiedoopie's review
LMFAO please im sorry the disclaimer in the beginning and the writing oh god
kimberlyb's review
5.0
I give this a 4.5
I liked the story. I want to read the story of Uriel and Kalifa. I want to read Draco's story to learn about his future mate.
I liked the story. I want to read the story of Uriel and Kalifa. I want to read Draco's story to learn about his future mate.