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drbuffyfanify's review
emotional
tense
medium-paced
2.5
While the story had potential, the edits were non-existent. I am usually not a stickler when it comes to grammar and spelling but this was so bad that it became distracting. There were several parts where I didn't know what was even happening because of the word errors.
It's a dual POV story but it was confusing. At times, we would get a recap of events from both sides and others would continue to push the narrative forward. At the start of each chapter, I would have liked to have known if the POV was a revisit or not. Otherwise it was a bit jarring.
It's a dual POV story but it was confusing. At times, we would get a recap of events from both sides and others would continue to push the narrative forward. At the start of each chapter, I would have liked to have known if the POV was a revisit or not. Otherwise it was a bit jarring.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Gore, Sexual content, Kidnapping, Murder, and Pregnancy
Moderate: Toxic relationship and War
Minor: Death of parent
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