karlakayjenniges's review
3.0
A short novella combining myster/ thriller with horror/suspense. It started out really strong, focusing on the main character trying to solve a case of missing children.
But as it progressed, the flow of the story felt disconnected. Too many time lapses, without any explanation of what may have happened in between. It focused on crime throughout the whole story and suddenly ended with paranormal. I feel it would have been better if it would have continued with more of the reality aspect. It was written well and somewhat entertaining.
But as it progressed, the flow of the story felt disconnected. Too many time lapses, without any explanation of what may have happened in between. It focused on crime throughout the whole story and suddenly ended with paranormal. I feel it would have been better if it would have continued with more of the reality aspect. It was written well and somewhat entertaining.
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