jennycazzola's review
2.0
This felt more like the beginning of a Story than an actual Story to me. Also, I found that Owen and Kayla acted too mature and heroic for high-school students.
regencyfan93's review
4.0
One thing I couldn't figure out was why Owen kept saying that Kayla could have been prom queen. Was it her looks and "prom queen" is shorthand for beautiful?
poultrymunitions's review
1.0
Tone-deaf.
One does not generally 'slam' one's own head against a brick wall in rebuke.
Or swallow when one does not, in fact, wish to swallow.
Or stick a finger down one's throat to ralph-up what one has previously spent unspecified minutes extracting of one's own free will and then, docilely, swallowing.
*irritated*
One does not generally 'slam' one's own head against a brick wall in rebuke.
Or swallow when one does not, in fact, wish to swallow.
Or stick a finger down one's throat to ralph-up what one has previously spent unspecified minutes extracting of one's own free will and then, docilely, swallowing.
*irritated*
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