Reviews with content warning for Misogyny - An Ember in the Ashes

This was an unoriginal, poorly written book. To start, the world-building was extremely lacking with names that felt like placeholders the author forgot to change ("The Empire", "the Resistance", "Masks" for the bad guys who wear masks). There were "factions", which gave me 2010s YA dystopian vibes, in a bad way. These factions were just "Martials" (read: evil) vs "Scholars (read: good), plus some Tribesmen (?). The only history we get of the world they live in comes during a single conversation about 60-70% through the book. There were jinn and other fantastical creatures that barely got any page time and were hardly a threat at all. There was a random group of somewhat religion-coded immortal mind-readers that were evil Martial "bad guys" until they randomly decided for some moments that they wanted to help the "good guys". I could not figure out their purpose in this book at all.

I put "bad guys" and "good guys" in quotes because it was abundantly clear who is meant to be good and bad, there is no moral grayness here whatsoever. The bad guys are so incredibly bad that they weren't even scary, because I was rolling my eyes at their mustache-twirling, over the top antics. The author heavily relied on shock factor for her character development and world building. Why make a morally gray character when you can just have her beat a 10 year old to death (not a spoiler, it happens in the beginning)? Why make an complex political background when you can just have the entire story take place at a school that raises children to be murderers/torturers/rapists?

All the characters are extremely flat, which made it annoying to be in their heads because they only had 1-2 topics of thought each. And we had the pleasure of having not one but TWO unbelievable love triangles, one for each main character we were stuck with! There was absolutely no grounds for their interest in each other besides some eye contact (with the exception of one side of one love triangle).

I haven't even gotten to the plot yet, but there's not much to say besides it was predictable and boring. Then again, it's hard to have a good plot with no world-building or character development to build on. The main plot was meant to be about Laia spying in the school and Elias going through trials to become emperor, but the trials were all pretty short and unsurprising, and Laia's spying attempts left much to be desired.

I imagine the remaining books will expand on the love triangles and the world will expand too. I went into this book planning on reading the entire series, but for my sanity, I will not be continuing. I gave it 2 instead of 1 stars just because it was readable and that's a somewhat redeemable quality. Also, as annoying as Laia was, it was nice to have a heroine in YA fantasy who was not a bad-ass, fearless assassin from the jump. If I had read this 10 years ago I probably would have eaten it up.

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bwgwave's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional mysterious reflective sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

4.0

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tabea1409's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

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ceruleanheather's review against another edition

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adventurous dark emotional tense fast-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0

“Life is made of so many moments that mean nothing. Then one day, a single moment comes along to define every second that comes after.”

This book was one of those slow burn books for me. It started out slow, but interested me enough to keep going. The issue was that I listened to the audiobook on Libby to start with, and I had to return it before I finished listening! So of course I had to get the kindle edition. Thankfully that just happened to coincide with a re-read event the publisher was doing the ebook was on sale! Yay!

Anyway, rambling aside, something happened about a third of the way through the book and I was hooked. I was so mad at some of the things happening. I had to keep reading because surely there would be justice? Then I realized it is a 4 book series...

Elias is definitely a tortured soul. He is a Mask, a soldier for the empire whose only purpose after graduating Blackcliff Academy is to be a soldier, yet he resists in small ways. He is loyal to those who deserve it, kind despite his upbringing, and also conflicted about morality and destiny. Elias is best friends with Helene, the only female student at Blackcliff. They have an easy relationship with one another, always watching each other's backs. However some feelings start to complicate things between them, and we see how their choices differ but the motives for both characters are similar. Elias feels more deeply than you'd expect from someone in his position, and I think that his empathy is ultimately what will continue to drive him in the next few books. Helene made my heart hurt.

Laia is fierce, though she doesn't know it at first. She starts the story as a very frightened girl, yet she has fighting instincts from the beginning. She is a Scholar, which ironically means she isn't supposed to be able to read and is also part of the lower class in this society. After some very traumatic experiences, Laia eventually finds herself seeking the help of the Resistance. This leads to her infiltrating Blackcliff under the guise of being a slave, but unfortunately this means she is the slave of the absolutely ruthless and terrifying Commandant. Her loyalty and love for her brother drive her, but she also eventually connects with Elias and that affects some of her choices.

The love triangle was definitely a plot point, but I wouldn't say that it drove the story. Instead it was more about each character's individual choices and morality. The story is very fast paced, with lots of action and information coming in from both perspectives. There are prophecies, mysterious hooded figures that seem to run the entire show, spies, betrayal, schemes, reveals, and just a dash of romance.

There is a lot of violence in this book. This world is based off of the Roman empire, and you can definitely feel that in the events that occur. There is slavery, torture, physical abuse, SA, threats of SV, and then you add evil creatures who supposedly did not exist coming back into the story. All of the violence was well written though, and does not seem to be there just for effect. It helps to set the atmosphere and make you feel deeply about the characters.

Side note: If you liked The Hunger Games, Fourth Wing, and/or Throne of Glass I would definitely recommend this book!

I am definitely glad that I found this when I did, as the ebooks are cycling through going on sale during the re-read event!

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emilywemily6's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? No

5.0

Wow. Just wow… this book was a lot emotionally. I found myself so invested that I couldn’t look away even if I was so scared for the fates of these characters. There are high stakes all over the place!! The writing is beautiful, the characters are dynamic and nuanced, and I just want more. While classified as a YA fantasy, it wasn’t written with immature characters or simplistic writing. Even if it was put in the adult section, I would still give this five stars. I cannot start the next book fast enough.

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theresamothinmyroom's review against another edition

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adventurous dark tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? Character
Strong character development? Yes
Loveable characters? It's complicated
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

3.5

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talonsontypewriters's review against another edition

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adventurous dark medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? No
Loveable characters? No
Diverse cast of characters? No
Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

1.0

again the issue might really just be that I'm a hater but there is something wrong if rape threats are making me roll my eyes. bad writing, unclear worldbuilding, flat characters, terrible love square that overwhelms the actual (thin in and of itself) main plot, sexual violence as a constant random unaddressed plot device given nowhere near its appropriate weight.

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hurricanyounot's review against another edition

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dark emotional sad tense medium-paced

Plot- or character-driven? A mix
Strong character development? It's complicated
Loveable characters? Yes
Diverse cast of characters? Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

I SIMPLY COULD NOT PUT THIS DOWN! I swear to god that if this series doesn’t end well for the characters after what they’ve been through in this book alone, it’s ON SIGHT, MISS TAHIR! Can’t wait to get my hands on the next one.

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