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The Night Sky Festival by S.A. Stovall

ctsquirrel's review against another edition

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3.0

Cute, but barely a HFN. More like HFTN/MJATF (Happy For the Night or Maybe Just at the Festival). Most of the short is about Zach comparing the other three guys to his ex (Ethan the cashier, Broden the single dad, and Officer Kross the cop).

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3.0

I liked it, for what is was - a short festive story in the Warmest Wishes collection.
It is v short and so not much back story or fleshing out of characters.
Zach is a grumpy so and so!
Ethan is a cheery local
Broden appears to be a good family man, passing through
Kross is all muscly cop!
So Zach is presented with a smorgasbord of men, a few dances and a choice - not who I’d have picked for him but there we go!!!
Great for a coffee break, otherwise needs more length to develop
2.5*
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