smeyer2483's review
2.0
Meh
Okay, abrupt ending. Realistically I liked the story, I just wish there was a little more...even for just a short story.
Okay, abrupt ending. Realistically I liked the story, I just wish there was a little more...even for just a short story.
goblue's review against another edition
reflective
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.0
gmcousino16's review against another edition
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
sad
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
alexcard's review against another edition
lighthearted
reflective
sad
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? N/A
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
tggator2003's review against another edition
reflective
sad
slow-paced
2.0
I don’t know what the point of the story was. It went nowhere. It ended just as it started.
reyesreadingreview's review against another edition
mysterious
reflective
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? N/A
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
theonionboy's review against another edition
4.0
An interesting character study, and a well written short story.
mhprince21's review against another edition
emotional
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
kitaabeinaurkindle's review against another edition
3.0
You can’t help but feel sorry for the main character Alberto!
It did keep me hooked once Lola enter’s the story.
I could understand what and why he felt a certain way about the situation but the end just left me wondering where the story was headed to.
It did keep me hooked once Lola enter’s the story.
I could understand what and why he felt a certain way about the situation but the end just left me wondering where the story was headed to.
booking_along's review against another edition
slow-paced
2.0
a story about a young man/boy who loses his parents short one after the other when he’s 17 and after that spends his life working -or as it’s said in the book serving others which seems to be what he’s good at.
this wasn’t for me. it felt to slow and while it said something i didn’t really enjoy the tone it had.
oh well not everyone will enjoy every story.
this wasn’t for me. it felt to slow and while it said something i didn’t really enjoy the tone it had.
oh well not everyone will enjoy every story.