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elleclair's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.5
Graphic: Violence, Death, Grief, Mental illness, Blood, Injury/Injury detail, Panic attacks/disorders, Physical abuse, Emotional abuse, and Gore
Minor: Suicidal thoughts, Suicide attempt, and Self harm
meganmershon's review
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Sexual content, Panic attacks/disorders, Death of parent, and Blood
Minor: Suicide and Suicide attempt
frootea's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Confinement, Death, Emotional abuse, Fatphobia, Gore, Panic attacks/disorders, Pregnancy, Child death, Vomit, Suicide, Violence, Domestic abuse, Fire/Fire injury, Abandonment, Bullying, Death of parent, Grief, Injury/Injury detail, Kidnapping, Murder, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Suicide attempt, Torture, Blood, and Body horror
cryosphinx's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.25
The beginning was a bit slow and I was super confused and ended up having to stop and find a full synopsis of ASITE because I could not recall who is who and what happened. But once I got in to it, I enjoyed the ride as there's good pacing between action, story, world building, spice and plot.
I can't wait for the next book which will hopefully answer some more questions I have and how it'll tie back to FBAA.
Graphic: Injury/Injury detail, Blood, Sexual content, and Violence
Moderate: War, Child death, and Death of parent
Minor: Suicidal thoughts
crinkledmochi's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Body horror, Death of parent, Panic attacks/disorders, Death, Violence, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Slavery, Blood, Classism, Grief, Sexual assault, Animal death, Emotional abuse, Fire/Fire injury, Gore, Sexual content, and Kidnapping
embelle's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Mental illness, War, Violence, and Blood
Moderate: Suicidal thoughts
trzcuit's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
Graphic: Suicide
Moderate: Self harm, Injury/Injury detail, Grief, Body shaming, Blood, Abandonment, Fatphobia, Suicidal thoughts, Slavery, Sexual violence, Sexual harassment, Death of parent, Physical abuse, and Child abuse
Minor: Suicide attempt
plsnotanotherdamselindistress's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
4.75
This world is the one true escape. This book has made me feel every emotion I have. I felt it deeper than I thought I could feel a book story and I fear I am never going to find a book that gets to me as much as this devastatingly beautiful world did.
Graphic: Death, Grief, Panic attacks/disorders, Self harm, and Murder
Moderate: Cursing, Sexual assault, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, War, Physical abuse, Blood, and Sexual content
Minor: Suicide attempt
readswithcat's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? N/A
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
To start, I have to admit really enjoyed Shadow in the Ember. It held a lot of parallels to the FBAA story and started to kind of fill in some gaps but ultimately when paired with this sequel, Iām further convinced that both series are being stretched and milked for all theyāre worth for the sole purpose of publishing as many books as possible instead of telling a good story.Ā
By the end of this book we finally have a plot that moved forward. I hesitate to say plot twist because itās not - itās literally obvious from the beginning where this was leading, there is just a lot of fluff in between. It could have been 200 pages max. This prequel series probably could have been 2 books Iām guessing. Most of this one could have been scrapped in my opinion. It was just the same circular conversations and repetitive inner monologue the whole time. Situations that just felt unnecessary and pointlessā¦by the end, I was bored and exhausted by the redundancies.Ā
I get that Sera is working through some intense things, but she seemed to lose the confidence and spark she had in book one and it felt more like I was in Poppyās head again rather than this new separate character. I understand thereās a reason they are similar in some ways but as the reader I really donāt need to be beat over the head with it. She felt smarter and more astute in book one and in this one it just didnāt make sense that it took her so long to gain clarity in certain situations. In addition to this, this bookās banter and comic relief also felt tired and recycled. And itās an on going issue I have with the author in general, but the modern phrases (āI noped right out of thereā for example) feel so out of place and just donāt make sense. Itās so frustrating, but honestly not unexpected this far into the series. The number of times I rolled my eyes listening to this book is unprecedented.Ā
The god/primal hierarchy and power system of this world becomes even more convoluted and borderline nonsensical in this sequel. Again this is just an opinion, but I think it could benefit from being a bit more simple. The checks and balances of power feel forced and contradictory not clever nor are they clear. Itās like thereās a new reason why one thing canāt happen because of course, this other random thing we just discovered (!) suddenly cancels it out. If I need a flow chart of a power system to understand what means what, Iām just no longer interested. And again, thatās just my preference for a book like this.Ā
The prophesy also reads like word soup. It feels like catchy book titles were chosen and then shoehorned into the overly wordy prophesy that really doesnāt make a whole lot of sense or serve any other purpose than to, again, prolong the story and sell more more books.Ā
I think thatās where my overall issue is with this book and where the two series in this universe are headed - everything feels forced or like itās trying too hard to be something profound. It left me exhausted and disappointed.Ā
I canāt fault an author for wanting to write more whether itās to make money or because you donāt want to say goodbye to a world youāve built - nothing inherently wrong with any of that. but stretching a series out for the sole purpose of prolonging the experience, only highlights that thereās a lack of substance. And this, to me, is a disservice to the readers and honestly the characters as well.Ā
Positives!!! Because yes I do have them!Ā
I love the drakens. Mainly the younglings. Theyāre so precious and pure and I love how every character cares for and protects them. The fate of Jadis is really whatās keeping me reading both of these series. I have grown attached to her and Reaver.Ā
Overall, all the spicy scenes were wonderful and the most well written parts of the book. We love Daddy Nyktos.Ā
I really love the way landscapes are described. The use of color and shapes that are familiar yet differentā¦.I think itās the most unique aspect of this world and kinda wish some more effort had been put into those descriptions to truly paint the picture.Ā
Overall, I want to give this at best 2 stars. Iām settling on 3 because I will continue to be invested in it no matter how I feel and I donāt think it deserves a lower rating simply because I didnāt like it. There are so many people who love it and it hits differently for them and I think that is wonderful! The author spent time on this and deserves to be recognized for the effort despite my feelings.
Graphic: Sexual content
Moderate: Blood and Violence
sofi237b's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
I actually think i like Nyktos/Ash and Sera way more than Cas and Poppy. The romance is so good but so frustrating at the same time. Trying to explain the plot of either of the series to other people is rather difficult tho lmao.Ā
The worst part is starting fantasy series that has yet to be finished, and the idea of waiting for a happy ending for both of the couples, breaks my heart a little :((
Moderate: Blood, Mental illness, Suicidal thoughts, War, and Death