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fernanda_o's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
Graphic: Child abuse, Domestic abuse, Gore, Rape, Violence, and Blood
Moderate: Addiction, Animal death, Child death, Drug abuse, Miscarriage, Death of parent, Fire/Fire injury, and Alcohol
porcupine_girl's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Ableism, Alcoholism, Body horror, Child death, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Terminal illness, Torture, Violence, Blood, Police brutality, Medical content, Trafficking, Kidnapping, Grief, Religious bigotry, Medical trauma, Death of parent, Murder, Pregnancy, Fire/Fire injury, Abandonment, Alcohol, Colonisation, War, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Moderate: Addiction, Gun violence, and Toxic relationship
Minor: Animal death, Infidelity, and Sexual content
kathyreadsalot's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.5
Graphic: Child death, Gore, Torture, Violence, Death of parent, Murder, and Fire/Fire injury
Moderate: Confinement, Miscarriage, and Misogyny
malinhalia's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? No
0.5
The characters are extremely one-dimensional and most are straight up unlikeable (unable to conjure the slightest bit of empathy, emotion, critical thinking, or even a consistent plan of action). The writing style itself is very heavy-handed and every plot point is carefully and patronisingly explained to you in detail (you really don't need conclusion-drawing skills to read this book). In addition to this, the author in multiple instances unnecessarily spoils the plot in advance by having chapter openers (for example, notes to or from certain characters). This works well in some books but not in this one. They detract from rather than add to the story, as they make - in some places - several chapters unnecessary as the plot point is glaringly clear from just this short text. The writing is choppy and doesn't feel suitable for a book marketed to an adult audience.
Whilst I found the background of
Moderate: Domestic abuse, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Torture, and Blood
Minor: Animal death, Child death, Slavery, and Injury/Injury detail
alilbitofeveryth1ng's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Addiction, Child death, Drug use, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Sexual assault, Slavery, Torture, Toxic relationship, Forced institutionalization, Murder, Abandonment, and Classism
caseythereader's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Addiction, Child death, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Gore, Miscarriage, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Blood, Medical content, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, Alcohol, Colonisation, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Minor: Sexual content
barda's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? No
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.75
The first book had some flaws, but I still broadly enjoyed the characters, the setting, and the worldbuilding. While this second book fixed my biggest pet peeve of rapidly switching POV's (this one had the more standard format of a chapter only having one character's POV), it felt like this one was actually more confusing than the first one, and that the author lost plot momentum from the first book.
The characters just weren't as likeable in this book. I still really enjoyed Hassa and she's easily a stand-out character, but Jond was just boring and Sylah was not in the book enough for me to judge her characterisation. Anoor, however, I was the most disappointed in. Like Sylah, it feels like she barely has any screen-time in this book, but most egregiously she seems to regress in all of her character development that she gained in the first book. I hate to criticise characters who make seemingly stupid mistakes, as oftentimes they'll be realistic mistakes that you might expect one to make, but Anoor keeps making mistakes over and over and doesn't seem to learn from the negative impacts of these. She's incompetent and seemingly regains her naivety that she grew out of in the first book. This makes the twist
The plot certainly had some interesting bits, particularly with the Academy and how the cultures of the mainland work. I did also broadly enjoy the plot reveals towards the end of the book; however, they were all suddenly shoved into the end of the book leaving little room for the characters to breathe, and many of the plot twists could have been revealed and solved earlier if characters simply communicated with each other (
Broadly, this book's usually interesting plot was dragged down by its characters and overall characterisation. I still might pick up the next one when it comes out as I think the mysteries that have been set up are worth reading, but I do hope that the author can figure out where they want their characters to go.
Graphic: Domestic abuse, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Rape, Self harm, Sexual assault, Sexual violence, Blood, and Religious bigotry
Moderate: Child death, Death, Drug abuse, Drug use, Sexual content, Slavery, Violence, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, Colonisation, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism
Minor: Cursing
hailstorm3812's review against another edition
4.25
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Blood, and Death of parent
Moderate: Ableism, Addiction, Death, Genocide, Hate crime, Rape, Sexism, Toxic relationship, Xenophobia, Grief, Fire/Fire injury, Cultural appropriation, Colonisation, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Animal cruelty, Animal death, Child abuse, Child death, Suicide, and Abandonment
luckylulureads's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Alcoholism, Animal death, Child death, Death, Domestic abuse, Drug abuse, Miscarriage, Sexual assault, Slavery, Suicide, Torture, Blood, Medical content, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, Fire/Fire injury, Alcohol, Colonisation, and Classism
azrah786's review against another edition
4.5
**I was provided with an ARC through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**
CW: violence, blood, injury, death, child death, murder, miscarriage, body horror, self harm, addiction, drug use, emotional abuse, physical abuse, sexual assault, torture, confinement, religious bigotry, colonisation, slavery, medical content
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A good sequel expands the world, continues the story on from what came before and keeps you engaged. The best sequels twist the additional world building and the new direction of the story in such a way that it circles back to everything that came before and sneakily links everything together so perfectly that you’re left floored. That is exactly what Saara El-Arifi has done here.
The Battle Drum is a phenomenal follow up to the fantastic The Final Strife.
We return to the Warden’s Empire and the malevolent Tidewind with a handful of new mysteries unravelling, splitting the 3 primary protagonists on journeys of their own. Anoor as the newly appointed disciple of her mother, the Warden of Strength, wants to use her position to help all the people of the nation, not just the ruling class, but suddenly gets accused of a murder and has to work to prove her innocence. Hassa, as ever working in the shadows is also still in the Warden’s Empire and stumbles across another string of dead bodies with their own mystery. And Sylah has of course set off beyond the borders of the Empire to uncover the secrets of the outside world and hopefully find help to stop the Tidewind before it destroys all.
“The world is broken, but like an eggshell, life can bloom from broken things.”
Rejoice because there is a handy recap at the beginning of the book to catch us up to speed with the key events of book 1! Though I personally felt all was immediately familiar anyways as El-Arifi’s storytelling immediately sucks you back in. Through Sylah’s mission as well as Anoor and Hassa’s personal quests we’re introduced to new places, new faces and new reveals about the deeply rooted history of the world and it is all wonderfully compelling.
There are some additional perspectives added to the mix too, one being a known character who supplements Sylah’s chapters well and another point of view from a character all new, an outsider, who adds much in terms of intrigue, worldbuilding and the magic which is meticulously expanded on in this sequel.
It’s always fascinating to see when an author shows how multifaceted their magic system is through how it is interpreted and used differently across cultures and locations in their stories. At times it did feel like there were a lot of moving parts in this book but trust me the way everything falls into place is so so clever just be patient with it, I’m definitely not getting over it anytime soon!
Some things to expect from the first book that are the same here are that sometimes the chapters aren’t chronological and will take you back in time a little but this doesn’t throw you off too much. In fact past and present work hand in hand beautifully in the story but I shall say no more.
“Forgiveness should never be requested. Only granted. Work for it.”
The characters and their development are again equally frustrating and fascinating to follow. Anoor probably annoyed me the most out of everyone with how naïve she seemed at times but as I mentioned before when everything clicks into place just wow I have so much to say but also want to keep my mouth zipped because spoilers…
Hassa is still my favourite character and I thought I’d end this review by stating that Saara El-Arifi I do not forgive you for chapter 50, HASN’T MY BABY SUFFERED ENOUGH!?
Anyways, I enjoyed this sequel immensely and will now be eagerly awaiting news on the big finale that is book 3 because it is without a doubt going to be epic!
Final Ratings – 4.5/5 Stars
Graphic: Addiction, Body horror, Child death, Confinement, Death, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Miscarriage, Physical abuse, Self harm, Sexual assault, Slavery, Torture, Violence, Blood, Medical content, Religious bigotry, Murder, Colonisation, and Injury/Injury detail