gsanta1's review
1.0
DFN
It started out well.
“The burr and whisper of its labored action came through his emaciated flesh with surprising loudness. I frowned and went on to the lungs, and found them suffering from the effects of that faulty circulation.”
But then it ventured into and remained in such non-sensical gibberish that I couldn’t continue.
Abbu and Zud and Zollaria and Zitra and pyramids at Scira and the reign of Tamhys and the Zollarian War and the dark world of Zitemku, etc etc.
Also, I think it all comes too fast and there’s no learning curve.
It’s really a lot of filler for just a story about a man trying to impress a princess.
It started out well.
“The burr and whisper of its labored action came through his emaciated flesh with surprising loudness. I frowned and went on to the lungs, and found them suffering from the effects of that faulty circulation.”
But then it ventured into and remained in such non-sensical gibberish that I couldn’t continue.
Abbu and Zud and Zollaria and Zitra and pyramids at Scira and the reign of Tamhys and the Zollarian War and the dark world of Zitemku, etc etc.
Also, I think it all comes too fast and there’s no learning curve.
It’s really a lot of filler for just a story about a man trying to impress a princess.
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