jessilwow12's review
4.0
This is a short and sweet Manny story. The way I think Manny stories should be handled. Without a lot of extra and unneeded drama and angst. Just a lot of fun and heat. I always enjoy being able to drop into an uncomplicated story and lose myself for a little while and find a HEA in the end. So if you enjoy the manny troupe then give this one a go and you won't be disappointed.
ruthie_wk's review
DNF @43%
This was definitely not working out for me. Couldn’t feel the connection between the MCs, and the children started to feel like props.
Nathan was a shit father, and this became unbearable when he avoided his kids just to avoid Cameron
This was definitely not working out for me. Couldn’t feel the connection between the MCs, and the children started to feel like props.
Nathan was a shit father, and this became unbearable when he avoided his kids just to avoid Cameron
marreadsbooks22's review
3.0
2.5/3 stars
Is this incomplete? Talking about plotholes man! This started as a good story but then... I kept asking "okay now what? What happened next? Did the kids ever found out? Did they told them?" So many questions and ZERO ANSWERS! NOT AMUSED!
Is this incomplete? Talking about plotholes man! This started as a good story but then... I kept asking "okay now what? What happened next? Did the kids ever found out? Did they told them?" So many questions and ZERO ANSWERS! NOT AMUSED!
shelbanuadh's review
2.0
This followed the predictable course that most manny stories do. I've read worse ones, but I've definitely read better. The whole hooking up and then backing off thing happening multiple times before they get their act together was annoying. The relationship developed rather fast. The ending was highly predictable on all counts.
scrollsofdragons's review
3.0
Seriously the father who had to be told by the manny to spend dinner with his own kids is going to adopt another one. Also, why weren't the kids more mad at the fact their father never interacted with them, it was like when Cameron got Nathan to sit down with his kids at dinner that there was a bit of awkwardness there but then they just got along and it was a tad unrealistic. You can't abandon your kids and then have a change of heart and everyone just goes all nicely along with it, it just don't work like that.
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