aashkevr's review
4.0
4.5 stars
This was absolutely gorgeous.
I really enjoyed reading it, and I have already gone back to read single poems again while waiting for the bus and playing around on my iphone. It was a fabulous find, and I am really lucky to have been able to read it.
I have already started another work by the author, and I would definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a good "poem in your pocket" kind of book.
The poet does a wonderful job of showing rather than telling (telling is bad for novelists, but wrecks poets).
His clear intelligence shines through as he weaves a narrative with a minimal amount of words - what is gained and what is lost and what is being felt and thought are always at the forefront of the pieces, but rarely need to be "spelled out". The illustrations and quotations that marked the shifts in content/theme/category really helped to give the reader a sense of the journey that the work represented.
It's difficult, without just copying my favorite lines, to tell people what specifically I liked. I can say that the poetry resonated - I didn't like all of the poems deeply, some of them really "spoke" to me. And that's the beauty of poetry. You might like different aspects. But regardless, there is something to like. A subjective universal (yes I know that's a contradiction) awaits you. Read it.
Thank you so much "Making Connections" and Adam Byrn Tritt for providing me with a copy.
This was absolutely gorgeous.
I really enjoyed reading it, and I have already gone back to read single poems again while waiting for the bus and playing around on my iphone. It was a fabulous find, and I am really lucky to have been able to read it.
I have already started another work by the author, and I would definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a good "poem in your pocket" kind of book.
The poet does a wonderful job of showing rather than telling (telling is bad for novelists, but wrecks poets).
His clear intelligence shines through as he weaves a narrative with a minimal amount of words - what is gained and what is lost and what is being felt and thought are always at the forefront of the pieces, but rarely need to be "spelled out". The illustrations and quotations that marked the shifts in content/theme/category really helped to give the reader a sense of the journey that the work represented.
It's difficult, without just copying my favorite lines, to tell people what specifically I liked. I can say that the poetry resonated - I didn't like all of the poems deeply, some of them really "spoke" to me. And that's the beauty of poetry. You might like different aspects. But regardless, there is something to like. A subjective universal (yes I know that's a contradiction) awaits you. Read it.
Thank you so much "Making Connections" and Adam Byrn Tritt for providing me with a copy.
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