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saoreads's review against another edition
adventurous
challenging
dark
emotional
mysterious
sad
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
I guess there were too many negative biases and notions I had before reading this duology, seeing book reviews of it specifically, which is a folly because it's a different story when you read it yourself to get the experience. The novel's high fantasy emergence did not scare you into thinking it was a bore; there was this kind of indulgence and mystique with the way the author weaved storytelling; it made readers patient, allowing it to unfold as it does, and waiting to see how it will come about. It flowed with realistic aspects in relationship dynamics which didn't follow a typical one. There were no words needed to express how true this was within the Arawiya lands. You waited for it and just as you thought, it's a relief both calm and sorrowful with how it ended out. I can't wait to read more about what happens when the Zumra journeys back away from Sharr, though it's a question if they really did in the next book.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Torture, Violence, Blood, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, and Abandonment
kinsportch's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Death, Sexism, Torture, Violence, and Murder
Moderate: Animal death, Child death, Confinement, Blood, Death of parent, and Classism
oliverreeds's review against another edition
adventurous
tense
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
Okay. This book has the heart and soul necessary for a good YA novel/novel in general; however, it was simply confusing. The first third of the book is completely dedicated to characters who either die or become increasingly unimportant. In making the first section so long, the author lost something important. She overemphasized how important these people were to Zafira instead of showing it. I wanted to see what Deen meant to her, what her sister meant, what Yasmine meant. The dialogue is amazing, but there was too much showing. Specifically with the Deen timeline: what? why was he there? what did he prove? what did the book gain from him being there and then going with Zafira? It didn't add anything to either character. The journey to Sharr was also like one page. I wanted it to be longer. I was confused at how much time was spent establishing the norm for Zafira and then how little that actually mattered. Three-four days were spent in her home town and it did almost nothing to further the plot. It isn't like Deen motivated Zafira in any way. She made a half-hearted promise to him but like overall his inclusion was just... unnecessary in my opinion. And then there was the whole thing with Zafira's mother. It would have been so much more impactful had it been written, described, understood differently. As a reader I had no attachment to the character before she started laying down trauma and recovering from it. I had no emotional stake for her and her mother's relationship. Also in terms of plot introduction, sometimes the chapter would just start. And things would be different in a weird unexplained way and I would fully go back a couple of pages to make sure that I didn't miss something. Like one time they're j chillin on Sharr and the next chapter they can't find Zafira? There's no explanation for her being gone. There's not like we went to sleep and then woke up and now we can't find her. She just is somewhere else. Same with the darkness subplot. There was a lot that could have been done with that. The foreshadowing. The ~energy~ was there but it wasn't enough. I was just confused. What do these power mean? What are the stakes I think the biggest issue I had with this novel were things a good editor should have caught. There were a couple of character inconsistencies. The chapter openings were often unexplained. The subplots were not explained, foreshadowed, or developed enough. The lore was absolutely beautiful but the author expected the reader to just know it. It needed to be presented in a better way for the minute detail aspects. It seems like the biggest issue in terms of plot had to do with transitions. Whenever there was a lull, BAM weird chapter where something happens that is important!!! But it was unexplained. It was out of pocket. I think the author just needed to listen more to her story. To focus on how someone who didn't know the world would see it.
Things I loved: the characters. They are all incredibly distinct. They are the reason i kept reading. The writing!!! Is beautiful. This author describes characters in such a clear, precise, and beautiful way. The metaphors hit so hard. Just wow. I think that this author is incredibly talented. She clearly had a vision, knew her characters, and crafted a beautiful world, but some things just fell short. They didn't work quite the way they should have. I would love to return to this author once she has written more and really honed the novel crafting and transition aspects of writing.
Things I loved: the characters. They are all incredibly distinct. They are the reason i kept reading. The writing!!! Is beautiful. This author describes characters in such a clear, precise, and beautiful way. The metaphors hit so hard. Just wow. I think that this author is incredibly talented. She clearly had a vision, knew her characters, and crafted a beautiful world, but some things just fell short. They didn't work quite the way they should have. I would love to return to this author once she has written more and really honed the novel crafting and transition aspects of writing.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Body horror, Bullying, Child abuse, Child death, Chronic illness, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Gore, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Racism, Sexism, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Grief, Death of parent, Murder, and Fire/Fire injury
maurits's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.25
I'm bit conflicted about this book. It has a lot of great components, but also clear missers. On missers: when it comes to handling the mixture of grief and distrust, I think the author kind of glosses over it. Moreover, an important theme in the book is darkness, but we are sort of left in the dark (haha) about the specifics and how darkness relates to magic. Lastly, it can get kind of annoying that the author uses Arabic or made-up words that definitely can just be in English. I understand wanting to preserve things like "habibi" and "hayati" (both terms of endearment), but things like "hashashin" (assassin) and "shukrun" (thanks) are better to put in English.
But the things that I like about the book are more numerous. First off, Faizal's writing style is impeccable. She knows how to choose her words, and it makes her writing a pleasure to read. An example:
But the things that I like about the book are more numerous. First off, Faizal's writing style is impeccable. She knows how to choose her words, and it makes her writing a pleasure to read. An example:
You and I are strangers, Huntress. Allies by circumstance. We may leave Sharr and never think of each other again. But in this moment, we are two souls, marooned beneath the moon, hungry and alone, adrift in the current of what we do not understand. We hunt the flame, the light in the darkness, the good this world deserves. You are like Tamin. You remind me that hope is not lost.
Second, the setting deserves mention. The fact that Faizal is building on Arabia for her fantasy world helps defeat some clichΓ©s.
Lastly - sort of related to her writing style - Faizal knows how to take you on a journey with the characters. I wouldn't say the characters are exceptionally well-written (because they're not) but you can actually feel what they feel.
The plot isn't much special, but it didn't bother me. I suck at predicting plots so any plot is surprising to me.
All in all, 3.25 stars. I would recommend it. I hope, in future books, Faizal will further improve her writing. She shows great promise and I'll keep an eye on her upcoming works.
Lastly - sort of related to her writing style - Faizal knows how to take you on a journey with the characters. I wouldn't say the characters are exceptionally well-written (because they're not) but you can actually feel what they feel.
The plot isn't much special, but it didn't bother me. I suck at predicting plots so any plot is surprising to me.
All in all, 3.25 stars. I would recommend it. I hope, in future books, Faizal will further improve her writing. She shows great promise and I'll keep an eye on her upcoming works.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Torture, Violence, Blood, Death of parent, and Murder
Moderate: Child death, Confinement, Misogyny, and Grief
aseel_reads's review against another edition
adventurous
slow-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
obsessed πππ this was definitely an Arab inspired fantasy, all the language, food, clothes, political system, loved it!! I really liked the characters and their personalities/dynamics!! said NO WAY so many times at the end, which is always a good sign!! the plot was semi unique but I really enjoyed it. can't wait to read the next one
Content Warnings
Graphic: Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Sexism, Torture, Violence, Grief, Death of parent, and Murder
Moderate: Confinement, Mental illness, Kidnapping, and Injury/Injury detail
sadiefc's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
funny
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.5
Content Warnings
Moderate: Confinement, Death, Torture, Violence, Blood, Death of parent, Abandonment, and Injury/Injury detail
lunep's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Funny how the two times I've started this book it was in July
Anyway
I remembered this book as a solid 3 β, I liked it but actually didn't understand the hype...but I always wanted to read the second one anyway, and with Hafsah publishing another book recently I recided to re-read this one, read the second one and read her new book, and boy am I glad that I did it. This time around I definitely liked it more!
At first I felt it was a little too trope-y but nothing unbearable and I said to myself "well, arent most debut books a little trope-y anyway? specially with young authors" (specially having re-read the Eragon series this past 6 months lmao) so I decided to try and not to focus on that (tho just to mention, I felt Zafira at the beginning of the book,when she started working with Nasir and Altair to be a little not-like-other-girls) and eventually I stopped feeling that way
Another thing that bothered me a bit was how it didnt make sense to me that only the Ra'ads knew that she was the hunter: 1) they live in a village in a culture that's very much oriented around helping each other and community (Yasmine's wedding comes to mind), so I assume everyone knows everyone, specially because it sounds like it's a small village, 2) everyone knew the Ra'ads were close to the hunter, and Zafira's POV mentions multiple times playing with Yasmine and Deen a lot when children, 3) everyone must have known Zafira's family consisted only of her, her little sister, and their ailing mother, no men 4) Zafira uses the same horse as Zafira and as The Hunter, and 5) the day of the voyage she arrives at the Arz as The Hunter, on the Iskandar's horse, with Lana bint Iskandar and the Ra'ads...like cmon, make it make sense. I will blame it on it being Hafsah's first book that she wrote when she was 19, and it's not like, a HUGE deal, but it was a little hard to suspend my disbelief on that specific thing
However, I really liked the characters, I liked the development of Zafira and Nasir's relationship, and how everyone interacted with one another. I specially liked the female friendships, tho they don't have a lot of page time, I felt Zafira and Yasmine's bond was very sweet (also, I went a little mad in the first 200 pages because I couldnt believe no one had written Zafira/Yasmine fanfiction with THAT goodbye scene), and Zafira and Kifah's bonding was also really nice, I hope we see more of that in the second book. And I enjoyed the story overall, it kept me hooked, and I felt intelligent because I saw a couple of the plot-twists coming lmao (others I didn't, but I really should have, hindsight is 20/20). I remembered very little of it, so it was basically like reading it for the first time
I'm DEVASTATED about Deen's death, at first I wasn't sure if it had been necessary, it felt a little like a "oops, I made my MC who will fall in love with another man promise this man she would marry him after this mission, what to do?" cop-out, but a lot of stuff would have been had to be changed if he hadn't died (am I convinced he HAD to die tho? still not, but I get it would have changed things)
Also absolutely depressed about Altair growing up feeling like second-best, a dirty secret to the whole kingdom, and then feeling like the zumra willingly abandoned him ππ and the fact that it was his own MOTHER who told the zumra not to go back for him?? kill me dead please
And...did Misk, Yasmine and Lana leave Zafira and Lana's mom in the village when they were gassed?? I-- speechless, I imagine if the answer is yes it's because they quickly got a ride with the Caliph's men, barely escaping, but STILL, what the fuck man
Anyway
I remembered this book as a solid 3 β, I liked it but actually didn't understand the hype...but I always wanted to read the second one anyway, and with Hafsah publishing another book recently I recided to re-read this one, read the second one and read her new book, and boy am I glad that I did it. This time around I definitely liked it more!
At first I felt it was a little too trope-y but nothing unbearable and I said to myself "well, arent most debut books a little trope-y anyway? specially with young authors" (specially having re-read the Eragon series this past 6 months lmao) so I decided to try and not to focus on that (tho just to mention, I felt Zafira at the beginning of the book,
Another thing that bothered me a bit was how it didnt make sense to me that only the Ra'ads knew that she was the hunter: 1) they live in a village in a culture that's very much oriented around helping each other and community (Yasmine's wedding comes to mind), so I assume everyone knows everyone, specially because it sounds like it's a small village, 2) everyone knew the Ra'ads were close to the hunter, and Zafira's POV mentions multiple times playing with Yasmine and Deen a lot when children, 3) everyone must have known Zafira's family consisted only of her, her little sister, and their ailing mother, no men 4) Zafira uses the same horse as Zafira and as The Hunter, and 5) the day of the voyage she arrives at the Arz as The Hunter, on the Iskandar's horse, with Lana bint Iskandar and the Ra'ads...like cmon, make it make sense. I will blame it on it being Hafsah's first book that she wrote when she was 19, and it's not like, a HUGE deal, but it was a little hard to suspend my disbelief on that specific thing
However, I really liked the characters, I liked the development of Zafira and Nasir's relationship, and how everyone interacted with one another. I specially liked the female friendships, tho they don't have a lot of page time, I felt Zafira and Yasmine's bond was very sweet (also, I went a little mad in the first 200 pages because I couldnt believe no one had written Zafira/Yasmine fanfiction with THAT goodbye scene), and Zafira and Kifah's bonding was also really nice, I hope we see more of that in the second book. And I enjoyed the story overall, it kept me hooked, and I felt intelligent because I saw a couple of the plot-twists coming lmao (others I didn't, but I really should have, hindsight is 20/20). I remembered very little of it, so it was basically like reading it for the first time
Also absolutely depressed about Altair growing up feeling like second-best, a dirty secret to the whole kingdom, and then feeling like the zumra willingly abandoned him ππ and the fact that it was his own MOTHER who told the zumra not to go back for him?? kill me dead please
And...did Misk, Yasmine and Lana leave Zafira and Lana's mom in the village when they were gassed?? I-- speechless, I imagine if the answer is yes it's because they quickly got a ride with the Caliph's men, barely escaping, but STILL, what the fuck man
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child abuse, Confinement, Death, Emotional abuse, Misogyny, Torture, Violence, Blood, Kidnapping, Grief, and Murder
Moderate: Child death, Mental illness, Self harm, and Death of parent
Minor: Cursing, Physical abuse, Suicidal thoughts, Toxic relationship, Vomit, Medical content, Fire/Fire injury, Alcohol, and Injury/Injury detail
boxalligators's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
5.0
Rep:
Gay side character
Gay side character
Content Warnings
Graphic: Gore, Violence, Blood, Grief, Death of parent, and Murder
Moderate: Child abuse, Confinement, Misogyny, and Torture
Minor: Animal death, Child death, and Kidnapping
bookishundercover's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
funny
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
I really loved this book!! The first 160 pages was too slow!! Hard to get in to. But after that I forgot I was reading! It was hard to love Nasir character but after getting to know him and his background I started to like him. Loved Zafira!! Just....I love her!! And Altair is my comfort character.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Child death, Confinement, Cursing, Death, Domestic abuse, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Misogyny, Torture, Violence, Death of parent, Gaslighting, Abandonment, Sexual harassment, and Colonisation
baexlee's review against another edition
adventurous
inspiring
reflective
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Character
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
We Hunt the Flame is spell binding and magical and despite my initial challenges to adjust to Faizal's unique writing style I really enjoyed Zafira's journey. The story is told through Zafira and Nasir's third person limited point of view which allows Faizal to introduce the larger world and Nasir's complex character despite Zafira's rather limited experience beyond her own village and the Arz. Some of the things that I struggled with were related to my own preference with writing style, I just found that the shorter chapters and short sentences made it hard to motivate myself to read when I was picking up and putting it down constantly. If you don't like long winded writing then you will love this book.
Despite my qualms with the style, the overall story is beautifully told and the pacing builds Zafira into a stunning and compassionate heroine that is complex and multifaceted. This is not to say that Nasir falls flat in comparison to her in any way either, as their tale and the adventure the ultimately brings them together takes care to equally develop and pay attention to each of them as it builds. The thing that holds me back from rating this anything higher than four stars is that there were many times where I felt battles, conflicts or other challenges were resolved with a bit too little detail for my taste, some of them felt a bit too non-descript or fade-to-black so to speak. Now my opinion could very well be colored by the fact the last book I read was extremely over detailed in it's battle scene's, so take that with a grain of salt, but I believe my rating to be fair.
Despite my qualms with the style, the overall story is beautifully told and the pacing builds Zafira into a stunning and compassionate heroine that is complex and multifaceted. This is not to say that Nasir falls flat in comparison to her in any way either, as their tale and the adventure the ultimately brings them together takes care to equally develop and pay attention to each of them as it builds. The thing that holds me back from rating this anything higher than four stars is that there were many times where I felt battles, conflicts or other challenges were resolved with a bit too little detail for my taste, some of them felt a bit too non-descript or fade-to-black so to speak. Now my opinion could very well be colored by the fact the last book I read was extremely over detailed in it's battle scene's, so take that with a grain of salt, but I believe my rating to be fair.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Child death, Confinement, Death, Physical abuse, Sexism, Grief, and Death of parent
Minor: Blood