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cinderackerman's review against another edition
I was interested in this story, we're all a sucker for a good Vampire romance, but I couldn't get myself invested in this one. There were a few things that didn't seem to add up and the pace of the story was almost too quick. Drawing out the story a little more could do a world of wonders and could also patch up some of the holes.
Something about the main character having weird 'feelings' for a person who wrecked into her and killed her friends is off. Never mind the story behind this, for the first half of the story, this is what we and the character believe. It just seems weird to feel anything but rage for someone like that. Also, her friends at the Bastion act as if they know what Reece looks like despite never meeting him.
I wasn't quite able to finish this story, but I always recommend that others read it on their own to make their own deductions!
Something about the main character having weird 'feelings' for a person who wrecked into her and killed her friends is off. Never mind the story behind this, for the first half of the story, this is what we and the character believe. It just seems weird to feel anything but rage for someone like that. Also, her friends at the Bastion act as if they know what Reece looks like despite never meeting him.
I wasn't quite able to finish this story, but I always recommend that others read it on their own to make their own deductions!
Content Warnings
Minor: Alcohol, Car accident, Blood, Death of parent, and Death
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