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dinipandareads's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
mysterious
sad
tense
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
I read this book as part of the blog tour hosted by TBR & Beyond Tours. Special thanks to Delacorte Press for providing a digital ARC via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. 4 stars!
I have to admit that the start of this book was rough going for me and I was even a little worried that it'd be my first low-rated read of 2023. But I'm glad that my persistence paid off because I ended up loving how this went and that ending has me so eager for the next book already. I'm invested and I can't wait to get my hands on the next instalment to see what happens next! 😍
I enjoyed the world-building in this book. It wasn't perfect and there were elements that I wish had been better expanded upon—for example, the magical history of the Great Spirit, the clan tensions and family history, but it didn't bother me overly much while I was reading. We do learn a little bit about how this magical society functions and we do get glimpses of the political tensions between clans, but it's not very in-depth and a bit more tell than show. I would've liked to see more of the differences in treatment between the more affluent clans rather than just being told about it. Aside from that, I really enjoyed the setting and atmosphere. From Qalia's desert oasis town vibes to the unknown sands and the magical city held within to the chaos of a colonized city teeming with fear and brutality across the desert border—every location was so vividly depicted and easy to picture. I think my favourite was the magical desert city but it was also, by far, the creepiest location as well!
The plot itself was pretty straightforward and simple as we follow this group of Shields from Qalia as they cross the desert to retrieve Atheer and bring him back home so he can answer for his treasonous actions. The story is told from Imani's point of view and although I tend to prefer multiple POVs, especially when the story involves a 'crew' such as it does here, I appreciated how getting only her pov allowed her character to grow as much as she did. Getting only one pov also increased the tensions between characters and I had a lot of fun trying to understand their motives and whether they were genuine and trustworthy or not. I will say there were some great character and plot twists that I didn't particularly see coming and it shocked me and made me furious too, but there's no doubt it also has upped the tension so much and I can't wait to see how these relationships play out in the next book!
As much as I was invested in their journey, it was really the characters, specifically Imani, that made reading this book such a roller coaster ride for me. I admittedly couldn't stand her at first and there were multiple times I wanted to put this down and stop reading because it was so unpleasant being in her head! She's sheltered, naive, spoiled and entitled, and honestly believed she knew everything right and good and true. In reality, she was willfully ignorant about many things from her privilege to her brother's disappearance and her sister's changing behaviour. She was really something else at the beginning but I told myself to have patience and I'm so glad that I stuck with this story because Imani's growth throughout the journey was so well done! The changes don't happen quickly and although part of me wished that she "opened her eyes" sooner, it felt more organic and believable how it unfolded. As she found herself making decisions and encountering situations she never thought she would, she was forced to acknowledge her privilege and confront her worldviews and harsh judgement of others when their actions deviated from what she considered to be right. She doesn't immediately accept her views might be flawed nor does her character do a complete 180 once she does accept it—she still makes mistakes and stupid decisions, but she makes a concerted effort to be more open-minded. I really appreciated that about her character and it made me enjoy the latter half of the story so much more.
Aside from Imani, there were quite a few side characters but most of them were pretty flat in comparison and existed mainly to push the story along. I was really curious about Taha and until now, I still haven't figured out what's up with him. There's no doubt he's been through a lot, especially knowing what his father is like, but the minute I think he's one type of way, he does something to prove that completely wrong. It makes me wonder what's really going on with him and I hope that we find out in the next book! I also wanted to learn more about Qayn and I'm slightly disappointed that he didn't have a bigger role in this first book. There's no doubt that we're going to get a lot more of him in the coming book but he really felt like a prop in this. Another character that I really liked and who piqued my curiosity was Amari, Imani and Atheer's younger sister. She's feisty and stubborn as hell and there were times when she acted pretty immature but then I remembered she's actually pretty young and she acted like it. But there also seems to be more backstory to what's been going on with her and I'm hoping that once the crew returns to Qalia, we'll get to learn more about her character. There's a big focus on family and the complicated relationship between siblings. I admired Imani's dedication to rescuing her brother and I also liked how strong the sibling bond was between the three of them.
Overall, despite a rough start and a slightly rocky road along the way, I thought this was a great debut YA fantasy novel. I was definitely invested in these characters and their journey by the end and I can't wait to see what happens next; all I know is that it's only going to get more intense from here.
I have to admit that the start of this book was rough going for me and I was even a little worried that it'd be my first low-rated read of 2023. But I'm glad that my persistence paid off because I ended up loving how this went and that ending has me so eager for the next book already. I'm invested and I can't wait to get my hands on the next instalment to see what happens next! 😍
I enjoyed the world-building in this book. It wasn't perfect and there were elements that I wish had been better expanded upon—for example, the magical history of the Great Spirit, the clan tensions and family history, but it didn't bother me overly much while I was reading. We do learn a little bit about how this magical society functions and we do get glimpses of the political tensions between clans, but it's not very in-depth and a bit more tell than show. I would've liked to see more of the differences in treatment between the more affluent clans rather than just being told about it. Aside from that, I really enjoyed the setting and atmosphere. From Qalia's desert oasis town vibes to the unknown sands and the magical city held within to the chaos of a colonized city teeming with fear and brutality across the desert border—every location was so vividly depicted and easy to picture. I think my favourite was the magical desert city but it was also, by far, the creepiest location as well!
The plot itself was pretty straightforward and simple as we follow this group of Shields from Qalia as they cross the desert to retrieve Atheer and bring him back home so he can answer for his treasonous actions. The story is told from Imani's point of view and although I tend to prefer multiple POVs, especially when the story involves a 'crew' such as it does here, I appreciated how getting only her pov allowed her character to grow as much as she did. Getting only one pov also increased the tensions between characters and I had a lot of fun trying to understand their motives and whether they were genuine and trustworthy or not. I will say there were some great character and plot twists that I didn't particularly see coming and it shocked me and made me furious too, but there's no doubt it also has upped the tension so much and I can't wait to see how these relationships play out in the next book!
As much as I was invested in their journey, it was really the characters, specifically Imani, that made reading this book such a roller coaster ride for me. I admittedly couldn't stand her at first and there were multiple times I wanted to put this down and stop reading because it was so unpleasant being in her head! She's sheltered, naive, spoiled and entitled, and honestly believed she knew everything right and good and true. In reality, she was willfully ignorant about many things from her privilege to her brother's disappearance and her sister's changing behaviour. She was really something else at the beginning but I told myself to have patience and I'm so glad that I stuck with this story because Imani's growth throughout the journey was so well done! The changes don't happen quickly and although part of me wished that she "opened her eyes" sooner, it felt more organic and believable how it unfolded. As she found herself making decisions and encountering situations she never thought she would, she was forced to acknowledge her privilege and confront her worldviews and harsh judgement of others when their actions deviated from what she considered to be right. She doesn't immediately accept her views might be flawed nor does her character do a complete 180 once she does accept it—she still makes mistakes and stupid decisions, but she makes a concerted effort to be more open-minded. I really appreciated that about her character and it made me enjoy the latter half of the story so much more.
Aside from Imani, there were quite a few side characters but most of them were pretty flat in comparison and existed mainly to push the story along. I was really curious about Taha and until now, I still haven't figured out what's up with him. There's no doubt he's been through a lot, especially knowing what his father is like, but the minute I think he's one type of way, he does something to prove that completely wrong. It makes me wonder what's really going on with him and I hope that we find out in the next book! I also wanted to learn more about Qayn and I'm slightly disappointed that he didn't have a bigger role in this first book. There's no doubt that we're going to get a lot more of him in the coming book but he really felt like a prop in this. Another character that I really liked and who piqued my curiosity was Amari, Imani and Atheer's younger sister. She's feisty and stubborn as hell and there were times when she acted pretty immature but then I remembered she's actually pretty young and she acted like it. But there also seems to be more backstory to what's been going on with her and I'm hoping that once the crew returns to Qalia, we'll get to learn more about her character. There's a big focus on family and the complicated relationship between siblings. I admired Imani's dedication to rescuing her brother and I also liked how strong the sibling bond was between the three of them.
Overall, despite a rough start and a slightly rocky road along the way, I thought this was a great debut YA fantasy novel. I was definitely invested in these characters and their journey by the end and I can't wait to see what happens next; all I know is that it's only going to get more intense from here.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Death, Gore, Slavery, Violence, Blood, Grief, Colonisation, and Classism
Moderate: Bullying, Torture, and War
Minor: Addiction, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Physical abuse, Rape, and Sexual assault
Imprisonment, Prison Laborbooksthatburn's review against another edition
I don’t like the pacing, nor the main characters. There’s a dizzying amount of detail about objects and surroundings but almost nothing about the magic that’s supposed to be of such importance to the story. I struggled to get through the first 18% and then stopped.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC.
Content Warnings
Moderate: Drug use and Grief
Minor: Death, Drug abuse, Suicide, Violence, Suicide attempt, and Colonisation
alyssasaurus's review against another edition
adventurous
dark
emotional
tense
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
This book was such an unusual ride. One minute it was painfully slow, the next thrilling and compelling.
The world is fascinating and dark, and the mysteries around how it became what it is kept me guessing throughout. The magic system is unusual. I love the method of attaining magic through tea!
Ibrahim clearly is a talented writer. When she is on point, her prose is lovely and poignant. She doesn’t overdo the language, steering clear of the flowery descriptors often present in epic fantasy stories. The result for me was an easy-to-read book with lots of passages highlighted.
Where this book excelled was in depicting the horrors of oppression and colonization. It’s clear from the beginning Imani is going to need to go through a paradigm shift to succeed on her journey. She has such deep-seeded trust in the messages she has been told her whole life, that she has no idea how others could have a different perspective. Her starting point in the novel promises huge opportunity for her to grapple with privilege and lack, and what happens when the powerful abuse their position. This is the most realistic and insightful conflict in the book. I’d love for people to read it if only to get a compelling perspective of a character interrogating her own beliefs she once thought irrefutable facts.
Where this book faltered for me was in the character development. The characters are oddly changeable…they seem to have a basic defined identity, but the book rushes them through conflict and all the ensuing emotions at an unnatural pace. The result was characters I liked most of the time behaving in completely confusing and nonsensical ways for their circumstances and who they seemed to be. And once you step away from the main cast of travelers, the supporting characters start to feel somewhat thin and left me wanting…Farida in particular felt like a thin copy of an archetype I’ve seen time and again in stories.
I think I will likely read the next one. I hope that the character development and behavior improves as Ibrahim continues to write, because she really has created a vibrant cast of characters. I would like to see them grow and continue on their adventures.
The world is fascinating and dark, and the mysteries around how it became what it is kept me guessing throughout. The magic system is unusual. I love the method of attaining magic through tea!
Ibrahim clearly is a talented writer. When she is on point, her prose is lovely and poignant. She doesn’t overdo the language, steering clear of the flowery descriptors often present in epic fantasy stories. The result for me was an easy-to-read book with lots of passages highlighted.
Where this book excelled was in depicting the horrors of oppression and colonization. It’s clear from the beginning Imani is going to need to go through a paradigm shift to succeed on her journey. She has such deep-seeded trust in the messages she has been told her whole life, that she has no idea how others could have a different perspective. Her starting point in the novel promises huge opportunity for her to grapple with privilege and lack, and what happens when the powerful abuse their position. This is the most realistic and insightful conflict in the book. I’d love for people to read it if only to get a compelling perspective of a character interrogating her own beliefs she once thought irrefutable facts.
Where this book faltered for me was in the character development. The characters are oddly changeable…they seem to have a basic defined identity, but the book rushes them through conflict and all the ensuing emotions at an unnatural pace. The result was characters I liked most of the time behaving in completely confusing and nonsensical ways for their circumstances and who they seemed to be. And once you step away from the main cast of travelers, the supporting characters start to feel somewhat thin and left me wanting…Farida in particular felt like a thin copy of an archetype I’ve seen time and again in stories.
I think I will likely read the next one. I hope that the character development and behavior improves as Ibrahim continues to write, because she really has created a vibrant cast of characters. I would like to see them grow and continue on their adventures.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Animal death, Body horror, Cancer, Child abuse, Child death, Confinement, Death, Domestic abuse, Drug use, Emotional abuse, Genocide, Gore, Hate crime, Misogyny, Physical abuse, Sexual assault, Slavery, Suicidal thoughts, Torture, Violence, Xenophobia, Excrement, Vomit, Police brutality, Islamophobia, Medical content, Grief, Gaslighting, Colonisation, Injury/Injury detail, and Classism