engelsigh's review
2.0
This very, very short story could have been really great, if it was longer and the author took the time to world and character build more. The story had the potential to be really creepy - it just wasn't long enough. I would really have liked to know more about Lizzie and the mysterious circumstances bringing her to the funeral home. I'd also like to know more about Adam and whether he was a ghost, or what. It would seem it should be obvious - but without the extra background info I couldn't be 100% sure. It kind of seemed like maybe Lizzie ended up in Adam's era somehow but then how did she make a phone call to the Realtor's office? Like I said, the story has promise but I would really like more details. The writing was well done - it just was too short. I will read more by this author to see what else she writes, so I'm not giving up. I rate 2.5 stars because even though the story has promise it's just too short and lacking in too much information.
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