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Keeping 13 by Chloe Walsh

kelseyjfisher's review against another edition

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1.0

DNF @30%. I don’t normally give myself Goodreads credit for books I DNF before 50% but this book is insanely long so I deserve credit for reading this much of this absolute snoozefest. It’s nothing but sappy love confessions, Shannon being tiny and quivering about everything, and Johnny being obsessed with rescuing her from everything.

nadinewwwinn's review against another edition

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emotional funny hopeful sad tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.25

kylieshall's review against another edition

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3.0

I really wanted these to be good, mainly because I wanted to get to Saving 6. Unfortunately I’m just not a huge fan of the writing. It’s juvenile and bland. I’m not invested in their story enough to continue on with Joeys POV. I think the only reason I got this far is because I was listening to the audible.
I think these would be an amazing option for a young teen, maybe 14 and up to read during coming of age.
Great plot & storyline but not my cup of tea. Sorry Lynch fam

cassiechapters's review against another edition

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emotional

4.25

clace_19's review against another edition

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3.0

3.85!

“For keeps?” I breathed.
He kissed my shoulder. “For keeps.”


In terms of writing this was so much better than binding 13 but in terms of story and pacing? Im afraid it was not (imo) I just feel like this could have been 200-300 pages shorter?? because this book followed a repetitive nature, it had no reason being like that except for its page count. See, with book 1 you at least were engrossed in the story because you wanted to know what would happen but I didnt really have that feeling when it came to this book. The same dialogues were being thrown around, Johnny was more about Shannon and his whole athletic part went away until the last parts. Shannon's story dragged as it went on as well, like the start was so good and by start I mean the first 250 pages and last 150-200 pages were really good as well but that middle?? sucked so fucking bad. I am still giving it a higher rating because I enjoyed most of this book especially the start with how things picked up right where they left off in b13 and in the end when shit went down but, for a second book for Shannon and Johnny....they felt pretty dull.

Shannon and Johnnyin terms of them as individual characters, I wanted more development on Shannon's part because tbh all the she did was talk back to her mother and Darren, and in a way I think this does contribute to character development because at least she was doing something but I wanted more. To sum it up she talks back (ok good for her) thinks about Johnny and whenever she's around him it's sex, sex and sex although I would admit how well her emotions were described and how the ptsd was shown through her point of view, I just wanted more of her overcoming it and one thing I specifically wanted was the confrontation with Bella which we did got but it was so diluted like actually so diluted smh atp. Johnny im a little conflicted because there were parts that I enjoyed so much and others were so disappointing, the disappointing one would be hi being consumed by the thoughts of Shannon like Shannon this and Shannon that and I love down bad MMC's but 900 pages is too much. I loved how Johnny treated Shannon's siblings, I loved their scenes so much and I liked how muchh cared for Shannon but I really wanted him to focus on his game as well. It was conflicting but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Them together were cute and I did understand the smut scenes like come on we literally spent a whole 800 paged book with slow burn seeping off it and even here it didnt really happen until 350 pages through but I liked their moments together. They were cute<33

The side characters are who took the spotlight!! Claire, Lizzie, Gibsie, Hughie, Feely, Joey and Aoife, Mama Kavs and Papa Kavs. I love them sm. I actually ship Hughie and Katie and Lizzie with Feely so there better not be a cheating switch tropes or im literally gonna riot. I like Lizzie and I want her story. Gibsie and Claire I cant wait for their book because I love them, ESPECIALLY GIBSIE! I want Joeys books so bad and I know his story will have me sobbing. Also I loved Joeys Mam and Da sm they are actually so precious with everything that they did!!! also that Aoife and Joey vs Bella and Cormac scene!! It healed me.

Overall, considering the hype and the avg rating, I was expecting something mind-blowing which I didnt get but I enjoyed it so much!
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I just know this one will hit so hard, considering how things ended in the first one (or its just Hoda praying that I cry because she's hell bent on making me cry >:( )

marianasb03's review against another edition

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challenging emotional hopeful inspiring medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated

5.0

amberwise's review against another edition

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fast-paced

5.0

hannahchung's review against another edition

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dark medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? A mix
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? No
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

1.5

shadowjana's review against another edition

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5.0

4.75⭐️
i loved it. great and funny characters
you really feel like a part of a group reading it and you dont want to stop
it's not a 5 stars only because i felt that it was repetitive the way shannon and johny talked about their feelings towards each other
all in all tadgh and gibsie and claire are my favorites for sure
oh and aoife too

hollysian1's review against another edition

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challenging emotional funny hopeful inspiring reflective sad tense fast-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

5.0