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Scott and the Woodshed: a femdom novella by W. Arthur

zakfar_magni's review

3.0

It's a good romantic story involving Femdom Domestic Discipline. It's just that the quantity of discipline scenes is negligible comparde to the length of the book. And first half of the book has literally nothing. Furthermore, the story had too much focus on Scott's 'desire' of being disciplined - something present in every story of W. Arthur. Having such a desire is not an issue. Numerous stories are written on the desires of Masochists and Submissives. But then the story flow is different in those stories. W. Arthur's stories do not properly match the concept. Because when someone has such a strong desire of something, they always find out the means to satisfy those desires. For example, in this story, why Scott never sought out a dominatrix or an alternative dating website for his 'desires'? He is smart man - a director of bank, and he seems to know about everything happening online. When someone desires something, the impact of that action is reduced by great margin. Scott desires discipline, so all the scenes are not exactly painful, and in a sense, not punishments. Hence, it doesn't matter in which setting and at what reason that activity happened, that activity becomes simply a sexual role-play. Furthermore, his life is not a mess in the beginning, as the story tries to tell.

Overall it's a good book, and worth reading. Consider it a general romance story between a couple having desires of Femdom Domestic Discipline.