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kays_reading_journal's review
5.0
I can't believe I let this book sit on my shelf for over a year before I picked it up, it's incredible!!
The romance, the plot, the world building, the aesthetics oh my god. All incredible.
It was a bit slow at the beginning as the story was setting itself up, but once our two main characters started fully interacting I was hooked.
I also think some of the side characters could have had a bit more development, but it's looking like we'll see that in the sequel!
Graphic: Child abuse, Rape, Sexual assault, Death of parent, and Colonisation
Moderate: Child death, Genocide, Gore, Grief, and War
Minor: Torture
cirrusfloccus's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.25
Graphic: Racism and Colonisation
Moderate: Rape and Death of parent
naa_'s review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Death, Racism, and Colonisation
Moderate: Grief and Death of parent
Minor: Genocide, Rape, Sexual assault, and Torture
kaneebli's review against another edition
3.5
Graphic: Violence, Xenophobia, Death of parent, Colonisation, and War
Moderate: Rape, Torture, and Sexual harassment
itsnotalakeitsanocean's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.5
What I liked:
- It bears repeating again but you can tell a lot of love was put into representing the Chinese culture, both for atmospheric purposes and so that it is sufficiently devastating when the Elantians come and destroy everything. The characters also got to criticise some aspects of their culture too, but in a respectful manner.
- Although I feel like the romance between the two leads is a little rushed, it was nice that there wasn't any smut between them. I have nothing against smut, but it would have felt gratuitous and likely gone against any precepts of cultivation the characters were following if it was included.
- On a similar but more grim topic (content warning for sexual assault/trafficking):
I'm glad that the sexual assault that the patrons of the Teahouse went when being sold to the Elantians was off-screen but given enough gravitas that it felt enough of a threat to any of the workers. This isn't to say such things can be depicted but I don't think it would have been appropriate for this age demographic (and the bar is so low for avoiding things happening purely for shock value in books to get people to buy them these days and yet many books still fail to clear it) - The magic system is well thought-out. If you've read enough wuxia/xianxia it's nothing new or fresh, but it at least adheres to the conventions of these systems. It was interesting that the Elantians had metal as their main magical element, however, since it is also one of the classical elements in Chinese. Likely it was a magic they stole, but nothing has been confirmed about it as of this book.
What I didn't like:
- A good chunk of the first half of the book felt like it dragged for too long with not much happening. I know a lot of it is supposed to be about Lan training herself, but it felt like there wasn't much else other than her training and getting into trouble. Granted this was because of them waiting for someone to cure Lan's arm, but contrast this with something like MDZS where most of the training is either off-screen or we see the characters go on little missions to show the progress of their cultivation and have opportunities for other things to happen.
- Speaking of Lan, I don't normally get irritated by girl leads but she kept getting under my skin for being disrespectful or doing stupid stuff because she felt like it. I could understand if she developed this kind of attitude after leaving the teahouse at the start, but it didn't make sense to me how the proprietor of the place put up with her for so long just because she had a beautiful singing voice. Even in the School of White Pines, it felt like she got out of punishment too easily for no reason (especially the teacher that pulled a Lan Qiren on her and made her copy out thick books with thin pages as a punishment).
Also while I'm glad her attitude and powers improved, I feel like there was no point where the change was visible. It just sort of happened. Her attitude was particularly egregious with her and Dilaya where she was instantly catty to the latter for no reason. At least the author didn't turn the story into a love triangle where Dilaya and Lan competed for Zen's affections. As for her powers improving, it's revealed it was the work of the Silver Dragon laying dormant in her. It was slightly foreshadowed so I'm not too mad, but it felt weird no one pointed out how prodigious Lan was at something she hadn't learned to do from a young age unlike most of the other pupils at the School. I also felt she got off way easier than Zen did with the Black Turtle when she commanded the Silver Dragon's power. - And then there's Zen. I know I put this series has strong character development but it barely applies to him, save for the second half of the book. For the most part of the story he's the world's most patient stoic guy and that's all he has going for him.
This is definitely a trauma response to losing his people and having a demon bound inside of him so that he could slaughter the culprits in revenge, but even trauma victims are more than just their trauma. He felt like the perfect love interest for the reader to project onto and go "I can fix him!" through Lan over having any actual character.
Graphic: Death, Racism, Blood, Murder, and Colonisation
Moderate: Sexual assault, Torture, Grief, Death of parent, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Genocide and Rape
abby_can_read's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
4.0
Graphic: Death, Racism, and Colonisation
Moderate: Sexual assault, Xenophobia, Death of parent, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Genocide, Rape, Torture, and Violence
allisonsmith120's review
4.5
Graphic: Death, Violence, Death of parent, and Colonisation
Moderate: Racism, Sexual assault, Torture, Blood, Grief, Sexual harassment, War, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Rape
nyah_ellexa's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.25
I must say, I very much enjoyed the journey. The story is very compelling and the characters are complex yet lovable.
I love fantasies inspired by Asian folklore and history, so this book was right up my alley. It tells a great tale of China’s real experience dealing with the colonization and subsequent war crimes by the British. Many plotlines of this story were directly in context with real historical events, which I found extremely intriguing.
Lan, our protagonist, is someone I grew to really enjoy reading about. She’s spunky and independent yet not written as this stereotypical “not like other girls” type of female protagonist, which is very refreshing. She has some character flaws, but I believe that’s what makes me like her more. Just because she is a woman and our main character, doesn’t mean she has to be this perfect embodiment of good.
The author does a very good job at writing a compelling fantasy. My only gripe is that some of the dialogue come out very forced or too wordy. There’s a good chunk of exposition dumps within the dialogues or dialogues that seem to run for too long, almost as if the dialogues were translated. I do not fault the author too much for this though, as I’m aware that English was not her first language. The dialogue still flows pretty well in most parts and the times that is doesn’t still aren’t so bad that it hinders my reading experience.
Another small thing: I didn’t like the character of Dilaya. I found her rather unjustifiably rude to Lan and, especially since she’s the only other girl in the story of continued importance, I was a bit turned off by the fact she hated Lan so much. I found her strained relationship with Lan to be rather frustrating to read about and I wish the only two girls in the story didn’t hate each other so much. It just felt catty to me and I hope they both develop as character throughout the series and grow fond of each other.
Overall, I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to continuing the series!
Moderate: Genocide, Racism, Torture, Violence, Xenophobia, Sexual harassment, Colonisation, and War
Minor: Rape
shaipanda's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
3.0
Edit: I’m pushing this up to a 3 because idk 2.75 feels really harsh when there’s nothing specific I remember disliking looking back it was just very meh for me so I’m gonna give it a 3
Graphic: Death, Racism, and Colonisation
Moderate: Sexual assault, Sexual violence, and Sexual harassment
Minor: Death, Genocide, and Rape
hailslynn's review against another edition
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
Graphic: Violence and Xenophobia
Moderate: Genocide, Sexual assault, and Injury/Injury detail
Minor: Rape and Torture