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Realm Breaker by Victoria Aveyard

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wrensreadingroom's review against another edition

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adventurous challenging dark emotional funny hopeful inspiring mysterious reflective sad tense slow-paced

5.0


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booksthatburn's review against another edition

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adventurous slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? No
  • Loveable characters? No
  • Diverse cast of characters? It's complicated
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

 This was almost a DNF for me, except that by the time I was thoroughly bored by very little happening of importance, I was already almost done. As an audiobook, at least, the story flies by, unafraid to spend a very long time on each event without quite being dull. I wasn’t engaged by the chemistry of the main band of heroes, though a particular character who appears helpful and then is shown to be nefarious was much more interesting. This lands in a weird middle ground, like it’s trying to be a character-centered narrative with a traveling party that’ll be a tightly-knit found family by the end, and it’s aiming to be a grand journey epic that takes its time and goes to interesting places and is more concerned with the journey than the destination. I can recognize that it has an assassin with a mysterious past, a battle-hardened immortal, a squire trying to never fail anyone like he failed his last knight, a young woman finally making her way in the world, and an old woman who is prophetic and mysterious. It also has a queen trying to consolidate her power, a mysterious and malevolent prince, and a traveler trying to get help. However, these brief descriptions are more exciting than what actually happens in the story. I recognize the roles they play in the narrative but I don’t care about them as people and I keep forgetting who everyone is. I made my list of important characters without reviewing the list from the official blurb (available above), and my list doesn't quite match because it feels like the characters were chosen based on tropes, but a slightly different list were actually interesting in the story.
Part of what makes everyone feel interchangeable is that most of their individual goals aren’t well-defined. The main antagonist wants to open the spindles as a kind of revenge for his twin being stolen and raised to an inheritance that he only lost due to the luck of being born second. That explains why he’s angry but doesn’t sufficiently explain why he chose this particular plan as his revenge. The queen is my favorite character, her goals and motives are really clear and they make sense in the story. I understand why she’s doing what she’s doing, whether or not I think it’s wise or good. As for the others, they want to stop the spindles from being opened because the spindles let in deadly creatures. Great, love a “save the world goal”, but their individual goals other than “stop the antagonist and don’t die” are lost in favor of cultivating mystery and potential later reveals. It makes them feel interchangeable, because even if their goals are explained before or during the journey they don’t seem to affect what actually happens. At one point they get imprisoned, and not only has one of them been in prison before, they’ve been in this particular prison and already has a way to get out as soon as they decide to implement it. It means that even a prison break (traditionally a pretty dramatic bit of story) is anticlimactic and almost immediately solved.
The events of the prologue felt like they should have been the end of the first book, there's so much tension and depth in such a brief space, and then the rest of the book doesn't live up to that promise.
The worldbuilding related to the spindles is interesting, but the details don’t have time to matter before this portion of the trilogy is over. I have no interest in the sequels. This was bland in an inoffensive but uninteresting way. I don’t hate it, I don’t like it, it’s just blah and I don’t recommend it. 

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caitlin033's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0


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thecourtofreading's review against another edition

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adventurous mysterious tense medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Character
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes

4.5

"your blood is of the spindles, of distant realms and lost stars."

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kindra_demi's review against another edition

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I’ve been trying to get into this book. It might be that I’m just not in the mindset for something so high fantasy. But here are my reasons I’m DNF’ing:
- I normally love multiple POV, but the imbalance of the POVs make me extremely uninterested in certain “mc” when they come up. There are also a couple characters I’m still getting mixed up because even though they are an mc, they are mentioned so little that I forget who is who.
- The characters feel predictable and when I’ve gone through half of the book and I have seen literally no character growth, I’m uninterested (especially given that the characters seem to be the thing that is supposed to make you stay).
- The world building is fine and easy to understand, but that’s not a DNF reason. I cannot get over the fact that the author has created these intricate countries and cities, can give names to every item, semi-create languages, but the looming event is called “What Waits”. It genuinely makes me laugh every time I read it.

I may return to it one day, especially after the next books are released, but for now it’ll be a DNF.

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abigailp's review against another edition

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adventurous medium-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? Yes
  • Loveable characters? It's complicated
  • Diverse cast of characters? Yes
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.0

This book had super weird pacing. I think a lot of supercilious content could have been cut to streamline the story. For instance, what was the point of including the two chapters centered on the Elder princess Raya (listened to the audiobook and have no clue how her name is spelled). Her chapters did not add anything new to the story. We already knew Elders are physiologically different from humans and can be quite wealthy. We knew Erida was going to marry someone soon. We knew Spindles exist and pose a great threat to the Realm. Her character was not developed at all and was quite similar to Sorasa's that she felt like a cheap copycat. 
Sorasa was my favorite character as she is quite witty and cunning. I am interested the see the direction her and Dom's relationship takes. (Their relationship reminded me a lot of Geralt and Yennifer's relationship, especially with Corayne seeming at times like Ciri.) Erida intrigues me. I am willing to give book 2 a try and hope it lives up to the great hero's adventure that epic fantasies often entail.

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ali_k0's review against another edition

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adventurous dark slow-paced
  • Plot- or character-driven? Plot
  • Strong character development? It's complicated
  • Loveable characters? Yes
  • Diverse cast of characters? N/A
  • Flaws of characters a main focus? No

3.5

Overall good book, there was just long periods of (what felt like) nothing, in-between short periods of something. Several parts felt like they were there to just show how awesome one character or another was. 

However, the world building was deeply thought-out, and Aveyard never got lore dumpy. I just wish the pace of the book had been faster, 560 pages felt needless for book 1. 

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