duntothewood's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
hopeful
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? It's complicated
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
3.75
just_a_city_gorl's review against another edition
3.5
- It’s a DNF since I’m just kinda forcing myself through it now.
- I liked it in the beginning and the characters are well done but im not actually attached to them like I usually am in books and I pretty much only read a book because of the characters so im struggling for motivation.
- It was a very cool idea and I do like the whole guardian thing and all the plot twists. It was very cool.
- And I liked just the magical elements overal, like the Tempore and Blythe’s hockey stick.
- So yeah, it was a very good book, and the representation was incredible, but it just wasn’t for me I don’t thing.
emieinspace's review against another edition
4.0
A huge thank you to CW @ The Quiet Pond and Ashia Monet for sending me a free e-ARC of this novel. This did not affect my opinion of this book and the content of my review in any way.
Reading The Black Veins was a really fun and fast-paced reading experience which I enjoyed immensely. With strong and unique characters, a magical road-trip full of obstacles and discoveries and amazing character development throughout the entierity of the novel, The Black Veins completely took me by surprise, in the best way possible.
The Black Veins starts as the story of Blythe Fulton, a young magician whose magic has not manifested yet despite her being a Guardian. She lives with her parents, and her twin sisters, a family she loves very much. One day, her family gets kidnapped right in front of her eyes, and she goes on a road trip to rescue them. With this road trip, Blythe, who has one destination in mind and who is determined to get there, encounters new people, discovers secrets and a lot about herself too.
First, I would like to say I highly appreciated the content warnings at the beginning of the novel. I think it’s truly important for more and more authors to do this.
Something that really amazed me at the beginning is how the writing shows the strong family ties between the Fultons. The build-up of these bonds was beautiful and refreshing to see. It isn’t something I often read about in such details, and it worked wonderfully for the rest of the story, as it established exactly why Blythe would go to such lengths to get her family back. At no point did I think it was unrealistic. Ashia Monet’s writing is superb at creating fluid and realistic dialogue for the characters, while keeping all of their voices unique. Not one character is the same and keeping track of who is talking is seamless. As I was reading, I kept trying to figure out how to best describe the writing and I would say that it has a certain edge to it. It is absolutely beautiful in the descriptions to build a particular atmosphere and setting the emotional tone of the moment, but it can also be very direct when it is necessary to get a point across. It flows amazingly well in the pacing. A few pop culture references are sprinkled in there, in places where they make sense; and there are few enough of them to keep everything fluid and light.
Blythe is a really interesting main character. She’s a 16-year-old, who actually appears as a 16-year-old would. Some of her reactions reminded me so much of my 16-year-old self and I loved this realism when it came to her character. This is such a strong point in this novel: the teenagers are teenagers. They might make wrong choices, but it all fits perfectly with the story and their characters. They also all react differently to each other, some of them like Daniel have more affinity with other characters in the group for example. After all, you don’t get along with absolutely everyone you meet in real life and especially from the start. We have a large cast of characters in this novel, and there are quite a few slower paced moments in the novel that allow them to express themselves and therefore build their characters. Despite the fact that, because we all meet them at different points in the story it feels that some of them could have benefitted from more story time, we get a very good idea of who they are. Their introductions are all different and very on point with their characterization. And in the end, we have a very strong found family and developed friendships within it. Sometimes, I had trouble seeing why these teens would put themselves in danger for a complete stranger, but it worked out perfectly in the end. The fact that there was no romance arc was perfect for the story; it was completely realistic with the circumstances the characters are in. There is some flirting here and there, but it isn’t the focus of the story at all. With the situation they are in, it makes sense the characters would not focus on that. And the character development was on point, all the characters end this novel in a different place they were in at the start. It was beautiful.
For the first half of The Black Veins, the world building was paced really well. All the information is not given to us at the start, which allows us to gather more and more information as the story goes on. It builds on previous knowledge caught in the novel, changing details or perceptions at key moments; I kept questioning whatever hints I thought I figured out. I loved the idea of the two governments, and it was a magical setting that was very original with strong themes. I loved how intertwined the magical world was with our world and how it also had technology. However, I was slightly disappointed because it felt like the world-building stopped at one point, and I would have appreciated a bit more development. The anticipation of their final destination was huge, and the pay off fell a bit flat for me. The ending was rushed, and I felt like a bit too much was unfinished in the end. This is obviously a series, so it makes complete sense we don’t get all the answers in the end of the first novel, but I would have loved a few more answers. I can’t wait to discover them in the rest of the series.
The Black Veins is a very strong character-driven novel, with a truly wonderful diverse cast of characters, all with their own voices and stories. With its fast-paced narrative and its unique magical universe, I really loved it. I will absolutely pick up the sequel when it comes out, because I cannot wait to see where the story goes next and to discover more about this world.
Reading The Black Veins was a really fun and fast-paced reading experience which I enjoyed immensely. With strong and unique characters, a magical road-trip full of obstacles and discoveries and amazing character development throughout the entierity of the novel, The Black Veins completely took me by surprise, in the best way possible.
The Black Veins starts as the story of Blythe Fulton, a young magician whose magic has not manifested yet despite her being a Guardian. She lives with her parents, and her twin sisters, a family she loves very much. One day, her family gets kidnapped right in front of her eyes, and she goes on a road trip to rescue them. With this road trip, Blythe, who has one destination in mind and who is determined to get there, encounters new people, discovers secrets and a lot about herself too.
First, I would like to say I highly appreciated the content warnings at the beginning of the novel. I think it’s truly important for more and more authors to do this.
Something that really amazed me at the beginning is how the writing shows the strong family ties between the Fultons. The build-up of these bonds was beautiful and refreshing to see. It isn’t something I often read about in such details, and it worked wonderfully for the rest of the story, as it established exactly why Blythe would go to such lengths to get her family back. At no point did I think it was unrealistic. Ashia Monet’s writing is superb at creating fluid and realistic dialogue for the characters, while keeping all of their voices unique. Not one character is the same and keeping track of who is talking is seamless. As I was reading, I kept trying to figure out how to best describe the writing and I would say that it has a certain edge to it. It is absolutely beautiful in the descriptions to build a particular atmosphere and setting the emotional tone of the moment, but it can also be very direct when it is necessary to get a point across. It flows amazingly well in the pacing. A few pop culture references are sprinkled in there, in places where they make sense; and there are few enough of them to keep everything fluid and light.
Blythe is a really interesting main character. She’s a 16-year-old, who actually appears as a 16-year-old would. Some of her reactions reminded me so much of my 16-year-old self and I loved this realism when it came to her character. This is such a strong point in this novel: the teenagers are teenagers. They might make wrong choices, but it all fits perfectly with the story and their characters. They also all react differently to each other, some of them like Daniel have more affinity with other characters in the group for example. After all, you don’t get along with absolutely everyone you meet in real life and especially from the start. We have a large cast of characters in this novel, and there are quite a few slower paced moments in the novel that allow them to express themselves and therefore build their characters. Despite the fact that, because we all meet them at different points in the story it feels that some of them could have benefitted from more story time, we get a very good idea of who they are. Their introductions are all different and very on point with their characterization. And in the end, we have a very strong found family and developed friendships within it. Sometimes, I had trouble seeing why these teens would put themselves in danger for a complete stranger, but it worked out perfectly in the end. The fact that there was no romance arc was perfect for the story; it was completely realistic with the circumstances the characters are in. There is some flirting here and there, but it isn’t the focus of the story at all. With the situation they are in, it makes sense the characters would not focus on that. And the character development was on point, all the characters end this novel in a different place they were in at the start. It was beautiful.
For the first half of The Black Veins, the world building was paced really well. All the information is not given to us at the start, which allows us to gather more and more information as the story goes on. It builds on previous knowledge caught in the novel, changing details or perceptions at key moments; I kept questioning whatever hints I thought I figured out. I loved the idea of the two governments, and it was a magical setting that was very original with strong themes. I loved how intertwined the magical world was with our world and how it also had technology. However, I was slightly disappointed because it felt like the world-building stopped at one point, and I would have appreciated a bit more development. The anticipation of their final destination was huge, and the pay off fell a bit flat for me. The ending was rushed, and I felt like a bit too much was unfinished in the end. This is obviously a series, so it makes complete sense we don’t get all the answers in the end of the first novel, but I would have loved a few more answers. I can’t wait to discover them in the rest of the series.
The Black Veins is a very strong character-driven novel, with a truly wonderful diverse cast of characters, all with their own voices and stories. With its fast-paced narrative and its unique magical universe, I really loved it. I will absolutely pick up the sequel when it comes out, because I cannot wait to see where the story goes next and to discover more about this world.
dihades's review against another edition
adventurous
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
5.0
lono00's review against another edition
adventurous
emotional
mysterious
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? It's complicated
4.25
stiino19's review
adventurous
fast-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? A mix
- Strong character development? Yes
- Loveable characters? Yes
- Diverse cast of characters? Yes
- Flaws of characters a main focus? No
3.0
I really liked it
jessicafavor's review against another edition
4.0
In some ways I’m surprised that this is a debut novel, because the characters are so well-crafted and I loved all of their dynamics with one another, but in other ways I can understand how this is the first book Monet has written; in the first couple of chapters, the style feels a bit stiff and formal, but the further you go into the book the more it relaxes. It feels like Monet finds a more natural “voice” about 1/4th of the way through, and from there everything is smooth sailing.
But the characters! The characters. The blurb describes this book as “the no-love-interest, found family adventure you’ve been searching for” which is a bold claim but ended up being entirely correct. I hadn’t thought I’d been searching for that exact thing, but Monet proved me wrong. All of the Guardians are so vibrant and quirky, and so inclusive — Blythe is Black and bisexual, Caspian is trans, Daniel has an anxiety disorder, Antonio is Latino, and the list just goes on. Their “babysitter,” a young woman named Katia, is grouchy and rude and participates in a kidnapping over breakfast, but is still likeable because yeah, she’s a bitch, but she isn’t a bigot. (My favorite character was definitely Cordelia, but this is supposed to be a serious book review as opposed to just me gushing about a new favorite read).
All of the Guardians have a great, complex dynamic with one another that changes over time. They aren’t instantly best friends, nor do they even instantly get along, and they keep secrets, make bargains, and occasionally even lie to each other. Ultimately, however, they are definitely a found family, and they keep each other going through even the darkest trials. It’s very wholesome, but it’s wholesomeness with so much tension because the stakes are so high. All of the Guardians are minors, but the danger they were facing felt so real and I was genuinely scared for them.
One of those dangers is the Erasers, who “erase” magic-users out of existence if they reveal the secret of magic existing to non-magical people. The Erasers have been pursuing Blythe and her family for as long as she can remember, and it’s a big mystery as to why they’re doing so until the very end of the book. My opinion is that the mystery of the Erasers was drawn out for too long, because their terrifying mystique had become hokey and annoying by the time everything was explained about their motives for what they did. Nevertheless, I’m really intrigued by them, and I’m really curious about what role the Erasers will play in the next installment of this series.
But the characters! The characters. The blurb describes this book as “the no-love-interest, found family adventure you’ve been searching for” which is a bold claim but ended up being entirely correct. I hadn’t thought I’d been searching for that exact thing, but Monet proved me wrong. All of the Guardians are so vibrant and quirky, and so inclusive — Blythe is Black and bisexual, Caspian is trans, Daniel has an anxiety disorder, Antonio is Latino, and the list just goes on. Their “babysitter,” a young woman named Katia, is grouchy and rude and participates in a kidnapping over breakfast, but is still likeable because yeah, she’s a bitch, but she isn’t a bigot. (My favorite character was definitely Cordelia, but this is supposed to be a serious book review as opposed to just me gushing about a new favorite read).
All of the Guardians have a great, complex dynamic with one another that changes over time. They aren’t instantly best friends, nor do they even instantly get along, and they keep secrets, make bargains, and occasionally even lie to each other. Ultimately, however, they are definitely a found family, and they keep each other going through even the darkest trials. It’s very wholesome, but it’s wholesomeness with so much tension because the stakes are so high. All of the Guardians are minors, but the danger they were facing felt so real and I was genuinely scared for them.
One of those dangers is the Erasers, who “erase” magic-users out of existence if they reveal the secret of magic existing to non-magical people. The Erasers have been pursuing Blythe and her family for as long as she can remember, and it’s a big mystery as to why they’re doing so until the very end of the book. My opinion is that the mystery of the Erasers was drawn out for too long, because their terrifying mystique had become hokey and annoying by the time everything was explained about their motives for what they did. Nevertheless, I’m really intrigued by them, and I’m really curious about what role the Erasers will play in the next installment of this series.
mobelchhh's review
4.0
Such a fun book--pure adventure from beginning to end! The amount of typos was really distracting at certain points of the reading experience, but I truly enjoyed myself. Couldn't put it down. I'm definitely excited to see all these characters come back in the sequel.