nixwolfwood's review
3.0
I was given a copy of this story in exchange for an honest review.
First of all, damn. I did NOT expect the ending. I love it when stories throw me off! It was a bad idea to read this before going to bed... I actually had to get entirely under the blanket while I was reading it, because I was a bit freaked out.
There are some issues with the editing, both with grammar and content, that took me out of the story a few times.
I know it was a short story, but I still wish it were longer. Just a bit! I'd have liked a little more detail.
3/5 Platypires
http://www.platypire.com/j-hooligan/affliction-by-sl-dearing
First of all, damn. I did NOT expect the ending. I love it when stories throw me off! It was a bad idea to read this before going to bed... I actually had to get entirely under the blanket while I was reading it, because I was a bit freaked out.
There are some issues with the editing, both with grammar and content, that took me out of the story a few times.
I know it was a short story, but I still wish it were longer. Just a bit! I'd have liked a little more detail.
3/5 Platypires
http://www.platypire.com/j-hooligan/affliction-by-sl-dearing
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