clcannon's review
4.0
A Quick erotic read for vamp fans.
This story is very hot and steamy. Vamp lovers will be on fire for Draco and Amelia alike. Graphic violence, mischief, and sex all around!
This story is very hot and steamy. Vamp lovers will be on fire for Draco and Amelia alike. Graphic violence, mischief, and sex all around!
uniquereads's review
3.0
Well... we will start off with what I didn't like and then I'll move on to what I did like. This is just my opinion.
What didn't I like?
1. There were a few wonky words and sentences. One should have been "one day" and it was "on day."
Just a few wrong word selections.
2. Jackhammer has to go. Slapping skin against skin is a better choice or he picked up his speed.
3. It could have ended sooner.
4. I felt bad for the parents.
5. Be careful with her age. She seemed too young.
What did I like?
1. The word "cocking" in a sexual sense and not in firing an actual sense.
2. The sex scenes.
3. Draco
4. A different take of zombies and goblins.
5. I don't think she needed the hunter or huntress thing. I would have went straight to the action. That's just me.
Now for personal notes:
A good edit would be beneficial. There were a lot of grammatical issues. The story was okay. The sex became boring after a while. Overall, it was just okay for me. It wasn't bad or good. Just, meh...
What didn't I like?
1. There were a few wonky words and sentences. One should have been "one day" and it was "on day."
Just a few wrong word selections.
2. Jackhammer has to go. Slapping skin against skin is a better choice or he picked up his speed.
3. It could have ended sooner.
4. I felt bad for the parents.
5. Be careful with her age. She seemed too young.
What did I like?
1. The word "cocking" in a sexual sense and not in firing an actual sense.
2. The sex scenes.
3. Draco
4. A different take of zombies and goblins.
5. I don't think she needed the hunter or huntress thing. I would have went straight to the action. That's just me.
Now for personal notes:
A good edit would be beneficial. There were a lot of grammatical issues. The story was okay. The sex became boring after a while. Overall, it was just okay for me. It wasn't bad or good. Just, meh...
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