A review by nirellis
The Predator by RuNyx
dark
medium-paced
- Plot- or character-driven? Plot
- Strong character development? No
- Loveable characters? It's complicated
- Diverse cast of characters? No
- Flaws of characters a main focus? Yes
2.5
Okay, now, here’s all you need to know: the characters? Love them. The plot? Obsessed. The writing? Painful.
I just don’t understand how a book with this many grammatical errors and sloppy sentences (sorry) got published. It’s harsh but I felt myself continually getting frustrated with the sentence structure/ errors in writing and the repetitive sentence choices.
I swear if I see one more “a bead of sweat ran down her *insert body part*” or a “his muscles rippled beneath his suit”-
My main gripe is that the idea has potential but the execution is disappointing.
Now having said all that it is still a 3 star read to me regardless of my many frustrations with this book. Mainly because the plot is one of those plots that you just need to know what happens next and I’ll be reading the next book because it ends on a cliffhanger.
I just don’t understand how a book with this many grammatical errors and sloppy sentences (sorry) got published. It’s harsh but I felt myself continually getting frustrated with the sentence structure/ errors in writing and the repetitive sentence choices.
I swear if I see one more “a bead of sweat ran down her *insert body part*” or a “his muscles rippled beneath his suit”-
My main gripe is that the idea has potential but the execution is disappointing.
Now having said all that it is still a 3 star read to me regardless of my many frustrations with this book. Mainly because the plot is one of those plots that you just need to know what happens next and I’ll be reading the next book because it ends on a cliffhanger.
Content Warnings
Graphic: Gun violence, Sexual content, and Murder