A review by isla_costigan
Count Your Lucky Stars by Alexandria Bellefleur

3.0

*3.5 stars

NO SPOILERS

This was a fun and entertaining second chance romance, mixed with just the right amount of jealousy and miscommunication.
I am always on the hunt for lesbian and bisexual fiction, and this one has been on my list for a while, and for the most part, it did not dissapoint. I loved the friendships in this story and the love they had for each other, alongside their romantic partners. I don't know if I have come across too many romance books that make the platonic love in the story such an important element, and that made me very happy to see--as someone who apprecates my platonic relationships nearly just as much as my romantic relationship.
The romance was well built up and for the most part I was completely satisfied with this story; but then I got to the last 5 chapters. My major issue here was that the pacing of the book picked up too too fast and abruptly, and the climax suffered because of it. I feel like there was more that could have been shown, in the lead up to the big moment at the end (you'll know what I mean when you get there) and also after it. In my opinion as a writer, editor and an avid reader, there should have been at least two more chapters in this book (outside of the epilogue, which was very fun... but I do have a few spoilery thoughts about that - see below). I did have a great time reading this book and definitely would recommend it for a fun summer romance read.
I have not read any more of Alexandria's books but I do plan on checking out Written in the Stars sometime soon!


SPOILERS
SpoilerWhen it comes to an epilogue, it isn't always needed, but they are fun additions for the author and readers in this genre. I like what they did with this epilogue, but I do feel like it could have been used to show a bigger moment in their relationship. I love that we saw Elle's wedding, and I understand why that was the chosen scene, but I think showing Margot and Olivia getting engaged might have been a stronger scene