A review by mrsbooknerd
The Last Witness by Denzil Meyrick

1.0

Ach! I was disappointed by the second installment of this series having enjoyed the first Daley novel.

There was some character progression in this book which I enjoyed. The on going saga of Jim and Liz kept me entertained and I liked seeing a more of Scott and his past in this novel. It is the interesting combination of rough upbringing that could have seen him land on either side of the tracks that interests me.

How Jim has made DCI I will never know. How he didn't click what was happening to Liz I will never fathom. Love is blind but holy moly, he seems to be completely oblivious to anything Liz related but to a point where he is just coming across as ridiculously stupid not just cutely naive.

Linked to this is the fact that there was legitimately NO police investigation in this book, it dulled my enjoyment of the series.
In the first book there were murders and the police spoke to people and a loose investigation occurred. But in this book Daley and Scott just sighed and whined about the Return of the JayMac and drank in their office or the pub or any other place they could.
It just felt like they were drinking to have banter and to make fat jokes about Daley but it felt quite forced and I didn't laugh once, whereas in the first book the humor was a bit more naturally occurring in events.

The main plot was set up early on and had impact and drew me in but then it fizzled out. None of the satellite characters to that main plot were likable and because the bulk of the plot was just three middle aged men getting pissed instead of investigating the big events there was just nothing maintaining my interest.

The drinking / banter sessions were interrupted by high octane, blood bath events where people died or got shot at and blown up and all that Tom Cruise stuff, but instead of investigating again Daley and Co went and had another drink or stood about complaining about it all.

I just felt disappointed with this book, the plot should have been thrilling but was too diluted by non-events and that made the big events seem like a dramatic parody. Though I want to know more about both Daley and Scott, I'm not sure if I would go in for the next book because I don't want to wade through bad plots just for the characters.