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A review by earthtoashleigh
Vampire Apocalypse: A World Torn Asunder by Derek Gunn
3.0
This has the potential to be a really great book. It has a unique plot and the actual writing is rather good however several things bothered me:
1) There are quite a few little spelling/grammatical errors. It's nothing major but could do with getting sorted.
2) The layout can sometimes make it hard to read. The author could've separated the different points of view better - I had to re-read a couple of parts before I realised it had changed to another person. Something as simple as adding an extra line break could easily solve this.
Based on the plot alone I'd give the story 4 or 5 stars, but the above point do disrupt the flow of reading which is why I've given 3 stars.
If you can put up with these issues then I'd definitely recommend reading this!
1) There are quite a few little spelling/grammatical errors. It's nothing major but could do with getting sorted.
2) The layout can sometimes make it hard to read. The author could've separated the different points of view better - I had to re-read a couple of parts before I realised it had changed to another person. Something as simple as adding an extra line break could easily solve this.
Based on the plot alone I'd give the story 4 or 5 stars, but the above point do disrupt the flow of reading which is why I've given 3 stars.
If you can put up with these issues then I'd definitely recommend reading this!