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A review by kle105
Better Than New by Charley Descoteaux
2.0
This was just too short to really flush out the story. Theo has been going into the same coffee shop for 9 months and has a crush on the barista but also goes on dates and makes up stories as to how he lost his foot.
It appears Ben the barista didn’t really know how old Theo was but when he does it’s cleared for takeoff and they get together that night. The end.
Too abrupt and also side characters that are never really developed and didn’t make sense in the context of the story what value they were adding to the story.
It appears Ben the barista didn’t really know how old Theo was but when he does it’s cleared for takeoff and they get together that night. The end.
Too abrupt and also side characters that are never really developed and didn’t make sense in the context of the story what value they were adding to the story.