A review by shelbanuadh
Ashes by H.J. Welch
2.0
This was a bit too cheesy for me. The ending, especially the epilogue, was a little too kumbaya.
And the "dirty talk" during the sex scenes? Yeah, no. It was a lot of "oh, baby", "fuck, baby", "harder, baby" "don't stop, baby" and lines such as "Oh, honey bun, yes! Take it, gorgeous, take it up your sweet ass."
As for Remi and Kris... meh. There was a lot more on-page interaction from the MCs with other characters than with each other.
And the "dirty talk" during the sex scenes? Yeah, no. It was a lot of "oh, baby", "fuck, baby", "harder, baby" "don't stop, baby" and lines such as "Oh, honey bun, yes! Take it, gorgeous, take it up your sweet ass."
As for Remi and Kris... meh. There was a lot more on-page interaction from the MCs with other characters than with each other.