A review by storykath
The Night & Its Moon by Piper C.J.

2.5

I really wanted to like this book, but I couldn't get past the writing. The overuse of epithets ("the blond woman", "the dark man"), overly omniscient narration, repetitive language (using "stare" three times in one paragraph), and honestly the sheer number of typos took me out of the story every time I was starting to get immersed. The world building and politics felt superficial and simplistic, all way too easily explained so that the characters could get into more situations as swiftly as possible. Still, I cared enough about the story and characters that I might try the next book...