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A review by emonroe26
Feel Me by Cecy Robson
2.0
There were a few things that didn’t work for me with this one:
1. the classic: the characters and relationship were not developed in a way that made it clear to the reader why these characters needed to be together
2. the unoriginal: the conflict confused me in the sense that I didn’t really understand why the conflict was there in the first place and what was really preventing the characters to be together. It felt formulaic in the sense that there needed to be a conflict, but there was no actual conflict foundation given.
3. the unfortunate: If you are going to have a character with disabilities (and PLEASE, let’s get some more rep going on up in here), do your homework and do it right. The heroine in this story is hearing impaired and sometimes it is incorporated in the story and other times it seems completely forgotten. It read like something thrown in as a cute accessory rather than actual representation.
1. the classic: the characters and relationship were not developed in a way that made it clear to the reader why these characters needed to be together
2. the unoriginal: the conflict confused me in the sense that I didn’t really understand why the conflict was there in the first place and what was really preventing the characters to be together. It felt formulaic in the sense that there needed to be a conflict, but there was no actual conflict foundation given.
3. the unfortunate: If you are going to have a character with disabilities (and PLEASE, let’s get some more rep going on up in here), do your homework and do it right. The heroine in this story is hearing impaired and sometimes it is incorporated in the story and other times it seems completely forgotten. It read like something thrown in as a cute accessory rather than actual representation.